I’d like to try my hand at testing if you’re still interested in needing more testers. I’m on rather frequently and can have an initial list of typos, bugs, ect that I’ve found by late tonight depending on the games length.
Now onto my impressions of the game so far. I’m highly impressed with what I’ve seen so far. The addition of actually having the ability to eliminate dangerous criminals automatically has me more excited than most “superhero” games.
I also found it rather funny when it said Nightreavers nationality since I chose German to start with as well.
Whether I’m entered into the beta or not, I will most certainly pick this up when it is released. Can’t wait to see more of this game. 
Edit one: Word missing.
When everything was booming and people happy Adding were before happy may make the sentence flow a bit smoother.
You were becoming something more than just human. Powers came to you in a flurry only for a quick moment and in moments of severe distress. One time when the bullies had cornered you, your powers manifested and although you were in a state of shock by the sudden overwhelming of your senses and did not remember what you did, the bullies never touched you again.
Edit two: Nitpicky.
Substituting moments with instances will ensure the same word doesn’t appear too soon after initial use.
Personal preference though so ignore this if you’d like.
You had spent some time flipping burgers and such small and good starting jobs already, but eventually you would need to do something more.
Edit 3:This segment is a bit oddly worded. Perhaps instead.
You spent some time flipping burgers and working other small starting jobs. However, you’d need to find something better sooner or later.
You could always fall back to menial labour, but in the world of sports you had a possibility to strike it rich
Edit 4: Missing period.
"Our last news comes from San Francisco, where a luxury yacht was found teetering over the Golden Gate Bridge this morning. "
Edit 5: possibly misused word.
Is it the last bit of news for the day or is it meant to be “latest?”
Thanks to living alone and being a rare sight for your parents, and so you were being pampered and made food for every time you visited.
Edit 6:Misused words.
Remove and so being That way it runs smoother.
“Can you believe that? I don’t know what to believe any more when even the news are telling me that boats can fly.”
Your father grumbled as he entered the kitchen, smiling and going for the refrigerator to grab a quick snack.
Edit 7:Misused word.
Replace are with is.
Sidenote:Is your father angry or happy in this instance? Grumbling and smiling is throwing me off.
There were others out there like you. Yett unlike you, they had chosen to revel in their powers and showed little regard for the safety of anyone around them.
Edit 8:Yet only needs one t.
Your own powers had blossomed into what you might’ve though of as both a gift and a curse. Although originally highly varied and very sudden in nature, your powers had slowly evolved into three distinct sets of powers which you could use mostly at will, although you still had a lot to do if you wished to master any of them. They also took a lot out of you, even a few hours of exerting your powers draining you to the point where you could easily find yourself sleeping for a few days straight, or eating your entire kitchen empty in order to replenish the energy drained from your body.
Edit 9: thought in the first sentence is missing a t
Edit 10: I believe drained fits better as it is considered more in the past tense.


