Before the Incident [Updated 3/30/2024, 71,931 words!] [Superpower, Supernatural, Action] [WIP]

I also died on that hill. I wouldnt be surprised if this author found lots of fans on that hill.

Thanks Author, evoking that emotion in us. Wonder how well the rest goes if can kill us all in a short demo. Heart strings plucked!

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Hmmm, I can think of Diaspora. The fighting scenes are really good ( Link to Forums thread: Diaspora - Updated 12 February 2024 [First Draft Complete!] - #5 by Vertigo )

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@TheBlackOtaku Sorry, but it had to be done :pensive: :pensive: :pensive:

@jjc73 I’m glad you felt such a strong emotion with the prologue! We will have to see how the story unfolds from here :smiley:

Thank you @Queen_Zelda I will definitely check this out :grin:

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I hope This is not a cruel joke about Anna I’ve been reading your stories. And I feel like you got something cooked up. That’s evil. I’m scared of you but I’m intrigued to see how this plays out.

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I am cooking indeed and I hope you like what’s to come :smiley:
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March Update 2024

Hello everyone,

I’ve been hard at work with Before the Incident ever since the prologue. I’m about an additional 30k words since the prologue totaling around 50kish words so far. I already completed chapter 1 and half of chapter 2. I am estimating the first arc will be about 3-4 chapters total. Release date is unknown since I’m unsure when I should release the chapters, but I do hope everyone likes it!

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That really sounds promising and I will wait for the update :grinning:

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Major March Update 2024

Hello everyone,

After working hard for the past month, I finished writing and uploaded chapter 1, 2, and a good portion of chapter 3. This update is approximately an additional 50k words. In this update, you get introduced to several new characters which you can flirt with. I also added a small addition if you catch feelings for these ROs, but you romanced A in the prologue. I hope you enjoy that! One thing to note is the stats. Stats are still a work in progress and are not fully implemented yet. I appreciate your patience.

I hope you can enjoy the new chapter! It was a doozy to write multiple scenes for various powers, but it was also fun! :grin: Thanks for reading!

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Woohoo, awesome!! Thank you for the update :heart_eyes:

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No problem, I hope you enjoy it! :grin:

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Hello everyone! I hope you liked the update, I would love to hear your thoughts on the new advancements of the plot and characters. (Did you notice the small reference I made to my other story? :V )

Not only that, now that there has been more development with the Contract system, I would love to hear which is your favorite Contract! Thanks for reading!

Favorite Contract?
  • Wanderer
  • Painter
  • Arbiter
0 voters
Favorite new character in the update?
  • Syo
  • Tenth
0 voters
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Your April Fool’s story was so funny :grin: :joy: :grinning: I had such a good laugh, and Aw Abe, he protected MC, so sweet :yum: :smile:
Both of your stories are amazing, I love Joe
…I mean Syo xD he reacts like we did romance A. when we didn’t romance A. (In my case, it was only platonic) Or is that on purpose? :joy:
Tenth is such a good character, I think she’ll be a great friend for my MC :grinning:

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I like the idea everything you speak as a lie becomes reality. That is the most dangerous ability ever By the way, watch out for that watermelon.!

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@Queen_Zelda I’m happy that you found my April Fool’s story, it was really nice to write something light-hearted with the cast of Twenty-One.

Also, could you point out where Syo reacts as if you romanced A? I think I fixed what you’re talking about, but I just want to make sure :0

I’m surprised, but also happy with Tenth’s current reception. I expected her to be disliked due to her initial impressions, but it seems like people like her a lot which is good! :grin:

@Takashi_Shin It’s a really strong ability, but it requires the target to believe your lie. So if your lie is too complex while you’re trying to lie to someone who isn’t smart, it could fail. But yes, I think it’s the most fun to write! It would be interesting to have the MC lie about a falling object causing someone to get concussed, even if it’s actually a harmless ball. :watermelon:

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Can we ripper part Ib limp from limp and torture her like not kill her no death is too merciful for them but give them a life of endless agony until they are broken worse than broken

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This is really good, you fleshed out the world of the story without making it a choir.

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It could be that I played with an old save. I start a new game and let you know again :grinning:

P.S. Yep, now it works fine, thank you :heart_eyes:

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A buddy buddy. That is what she wants if you get to her* Sitting down like a proper mafia bus with a cigar.* Death Is what they want.Don’t give it to make it painful She?
Wants to become the devil or demon and get more power. That’s what I think so. Don’t let her have it. Make it be hanging fruit for her.( My god What have I become!)

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Then I’m going to feed her soul to demons she deserve every kind of hell that we’re going to give her my MC will not feel any ounce of guilt for dishing out what she deserve is it evil to punish villains no she chose to be an enemy and her choice will lead her to her most painful demise

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@Ronin_101 I have thought that death might actually be an ultimate type of mercy for Ib. I don’t really see an angle where the MC ‘forgives’ Ib at all since I’ve written Ib to be a reprehensible human being. Perhaps there might be a choice to go for swift justice or prolonged revenge. A lot to think about.
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@Leon_Kincoln Thank you! I try my best to world-build without trying to give huge exposition dumps. I’m happy that this is appreciated!

@Queen_Zelda That’s great to hear, thank you again for mentioning it!
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It would be interesting to let the MC become unhinged :thinking:

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