Before the Incident [September 2025 Update, 300k Words] [Action, Urban Fantasy, Tragedy, Romance] [WIP]

Thank you for the compliments, I hope your heart is okay now :heart: But yes, I think a lot of people have solidified AA as their #1 RO for this story, which makes me consider how much attention the other RO’s get as ROs :thinking: I am thinking of making the AA route unlocked once the player has finished one playthrough of the MC, I’m sure it’ll be a nice treat for everyone, as always thank you for reading :grin:

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Fair warning, the Greek lettering in your banner spells out “Vefore tie Inchithent”. Greek in general is not an alphabet that lends itself to transliteration from English.

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Ooo, thank you for telling me, I shall keep that in mind :grin:

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Hello everyone,

Writing is going smoothly, but I did have a question on preferences for updates. I have this poll on my Tumblr, but I wanted to check with the forums of what their opinions are :slight_smile:

What Update Schedule do you prefer?
  • Shorter updates, but they occur monthly
  • Bigger updates, but they occur 2-3 months
0 voters
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I’m having trouble visualizing the painter’s ability, you can summon a canvas where what you paint on it comes to life, right? But how big is the canvas? Is it always the same size or does it vary? And how long does it take to paint for it to take effect? Because in-game, sometimes you have to actually paint it for a while and sometime it’s a ‘one stroke painting’ type of deal.

Also I’m not sure I understood what the Blotch authority does.

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For the Painter, I imagine that the MC has a default size canvas where they can comfortable hold it ,but depending on the situation they can resize the canvas like at the manor or at the bar. As for the painting speed, I would say it’s dependent on the experience and the situation’s severity of the MC. I.E the more intense the situation the faster the MC tends to paint. I should probably include a detail where the Painter ability does give the MC abnormally high speed when it comes to painting.

As for the Blotch Authority, the MC was going to essentially attack ------- through the canvas, by creating a replica of the scene, the MC planned to blotch it which would have killed ------- Sorta like the gif in Jojo Part 3
noriaki-kakyoin-jojos-bizarre-adventures

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Make a lot of sense and is more or less what I had figured, it clears things up a lot and yeah, that sounds like a detail that should get mentioned somewhere.

I had figured out the ‘voodoo doll’ painting part of it but the ‘blotching’ being the ‘kill command’ is something I wasn’t sure of.

Thanks for the answers!

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No problem! I understand that describing attacks can get confusing through just text, so it’s good to get feedback on this type of stuff :smiley:

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Hello everyone, I am please to announce that an update will be coming in August 2025, I’m excited to bring updates to both the MC route and the AA route :grin:

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Plans for August 2025 Update

Hello everyone,

Here are some of the following plans I have to include in the August update:

MC’s Route

  • Event with Syo (Anguish Route)
  • Event with Tenth (Crystal Dagger/Katana Route)
  • Event with Abel/Belle (Variations among Anguish vs. Crystal Dagger Route)
  • A Little Fun Detour Mission with choosing either Syo & Tenth or Abel/Belle

AA’s Route

  • Battle against Hamal, the Guilt Devil Arc
  • Introduction to the next grand overarching plot

I’m excited to show you all what I’ve been cooking :smiley:

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Peak

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if is anna should be a plastic bag is in her other hand

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Thank you for the feedback, I thought I addressed this, but seems like it slipped through the cracks, it will be fixed by the next update!

@Mid-Evil I’m going to keep trying to make cinema :smiling_face_with_sunglasses:

@legitpro123 That’s the goal! :mount_fuji:

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Love the new AA route can’t wait to see more about it keep up the great work

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Thank you! Don’t worry AA will also go through a rollercoaster in the upcoming chapters because that is the fate of all MCs in my stories :partying_face:

chiikawa-chiikawa-dance

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I went in with zero expectations and ended up playing so many variations of the playthrough that I had to stop myself. And the additional alternate storyline was a really nice touch(honestly didn’t expect it to go the way it did and was half expecting it to just take a short detour and end right back merging with the main storyline).

Could definitely see the Chainsaw Man and JK inspirations. Have to ask, if contracts are made between devils and humans, like how Belle was afflicted by her devil, is there a devil trapped within us which can takeover as well? Also, Tenth can have my heart anyday.

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I’m happy that you enjoyed the story, and I’m glad that you were pleasantly surprised with the AA route, it’s being well received :partying_face:

Also to answer your question:
Abel/Belle is an anomaly, with the background and relation to Faust, there are hints to what their true origins are sprinkled in the story. It has yet to be fully revealed, but I will say, it’s a different case for the MC. The MC is also a different type of anomaly due to their ancestry as revealed by Xiao. If you refused to use the crystal dagger/katana path in the duel against [-------], the MC would have been taken over by a monstrous form. I believe I made [------] comment that it wasn’t the MC’s Devil, but something else, for example

“Flickers of the void spark off the pest…Arbiter? No. She couldn’t have possessed the human. [-------] doesn’t sense a possession.”

To sum it up, Abel/Belle and the MC are two different anomalies in the realm of Contracts/Devils. But yeah, the average Contract user can be posessed by their own Devil given the circumstances. One of the upcoming arcs will explore that :eyes:

Also, glad that you enjoyed Tenth! I was worried people would find her boring, but I’m happy that there are Tenth enjoyers out there :star_struck:

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This might be a bit dumb but what exactly is the AA route?

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