I found some typo
Shouldn’t this be “Your internship” instead of “You internship”?
I’m confused here… did you mean “what drew you two initially ” or “what drew you to him initially”?
I believe this should be “found out” instead of “finding out”.
Shouldn’t this be “you thought” instead of “you though”?
Well, that’s about it.
Other than that, I really enjoyed reading it! Especially this part;
Keep up the good work!
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I loved the game, I hope it will be complete someday!
Hey, Author, I play the game and got a dead end. I was in Samantha Newell storyline, it happen after I do boxing with Amelia and then she said something about sitting on a winners table, I think. And then there’s an end just like if you finish the game. I play in mobile btw, I don’t know if it’s matter.
But overall even in short play, I can say you have pretty good and interesting story there, keep it up!
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Love the demo, and can’t wait to see more! I vaguely remember there being more past Amelia after the quick spar?
So I seem to hit a wall here after the MC gets asked has there been anything more between Samantha/Aaron.(the very beginning of the demo)
So glad you picked this up again! This is one of the few WIP’s I really wanted to see more of when you posted it.
Hello everyone! Back again with some updates.
As of the moment the demo ends where I intend it as it is still going through rewrites so I need to bridge the new parts with Amelia and Ray into the third chapter. Sorry for the confusion!
Also, right now as it is the romancable characters in Sam’s route are: Sam, Ray, Amelia (of course), Skylar, Katie, Jason (your co-worker), and Victoria (I recall there being a few requests for this).
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