ARGHHHHH THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! I’m totally invested!
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It’s been a while! Great news, I got a new laptop and have been working once again. I’ve had a lot of time to think more about how I want to struck the story so I’ve made some changes. The biggest thing being that Jamie and Katie no longer have their own routes! They’ll both still make appearances and be romanceable in their respective sibling’s route! There’s quite a bit more but I do want to leave some surprises!
The demo is updated. There’s new content to explore Amelia and Ray for those interested in them. Though, it’s shorter and much the Sam on Sam’s end for now you can look forward to more soon!
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hey congrats on the update, just want to report that the aaron route is bugged: after you customise your character you end up meeting sam for coffee
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Thank you!!
Bug should be fixed, thanks for pointing it out.
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So I got to the boxing part with Amelia, I waited for her to make a move and tried moving to the right and it caused an error, something about expecting a 4 but getting a 5 I think.
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Glad to see you back, I was missing this story! 
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I keep getting a bug where I end up meeting Sam for coffee instead of Aaron, but I’m glad to see this is back 
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And in the stats page displays Sam’s profile instead of Aaron’s.
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Got stuck in the Arcade with Ray I can’t get out of the simulator thingy. And how do I take screenshots with this computer windows 9?
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@IppoTheDriller Fixed! Thank you.
@Liza_P Whoops now it should be fixed. Thank you!
@anon57188313 Should display Aaron’s now. Thanks!
@MasterChief117John as in it’s stuck in a loop you reach a dead end?
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Yay I missed this, excited for what’s to come! 
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The bug causing players to be stuck in the plot of SAO (aka getting stuck in the VR game) should be fixed now!
Anyway u can add a save system
On a list of things to do, I promise.
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Can’t seem to get past this scene
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Hello! I really like the story so far, it’s very unique. I don’t know if this is something you’re looking for but I did find some spelling/grammatical errors. If this isn’t what you’re looking for, please let me know!! I know some authors prefer more substance-based feedback.
should be morning
should be official
I would put a comma here
should be your
comma
this
might be the wrong usage of a semicolon but im no semicolon expert. i would just say “If people… with him? Cool.”
should be lets
some more substantive feedback would be that, in reference to Aaron’s route, i think it would be good to have readers choose the backstory for how they and the bestfriend actually became bestfriends. it would give more character personality and allow for the readers to feel more submerged in the story. i think thats it for now though, great story premise and i like your writing style as well.
also i love the usage of “chatsnap” lmao
It’s a dead end. I just couldn’t progress anyfurther. Does anyone know how I can take screencaptures with my PC?
Is this the end of the demo?? I remember it had more scenes 
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