Becoming Guardian (WIP) - Updated 03/21/2020

What do you mean? I will be finishing Sam first?

Oh I apologise I thought you meant that you were asking if you should complete one characters story first or alternate betweem character stories based on poll results.

No worries! I can see how that could be misinterpreted as I wasnā€™t very clearly in what I was saying

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So is the friend just going to leave the baby on the MCā€™s doorstep?

Not in so many words, no :stuck_out_tongue:

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Hello! Look at me making timely updates.

Chapter one of the Jamie route is now live!

Play Here!

As always, questions and comments will always be appreciated.

And thank you in advance to anyone who point out any spelling/grammar/coding errors!

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thx for the update!!! :heart_eyes:


Seems like there is a gender error for the child

Itā€™s looking good so far just a few typos

And the doctor seems to appear out of thin air it didnā€™t mention her entering the room.

Should be fixed now. I deleted a part of the code earlier to move it and then forgot to put it back in. :stuck_out_tongue: The text errors should be corrected now as well. Thanks!

Thanks for catching that! The error has now been fixed :slight_smile:

Hope you enjoyed!

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Will the baby always be a girl?

Aaron will always have a daughter and Sam will always have a son.

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Will we meet the mother and father and will they be a problem in the future?

Possibly. Though, if both are introduced in their respective story in a larger capacity than ā€œI gave birth to/fathered this childā€ itā€™s not likely they would both be a problem.

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Cool thanks, also did you change some dialogue in Samanthaā€™s route cause she seems less into us?

I made some changes to the initial code the other day so it must have been a little buggy at loading text. Problem should be corrected now.

Good morning!

Katieā€™s chapter is now up.

Play Here!

Questions and comment are always welcome. And of course, error corrections are always appreciated.

Now, Iā€™m off to debate whether I want to finish my coffee or go to bed.

Cheers

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Hurray ā€œBecoming Guardianā€!!!

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Nice update
a few typos i.g. chose chose to name himā€¦

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You say, fixing her with an eye roll before taking a sip of your coffee.

Says coffee but I ordered water.

"Sounds like youā€™ve decided than.

than should be then

You donā€™t have to decided now.

decided> decide

I wanted chill. Is that a crime now?

I wanted to chill?

ā€œFine, fine. Give me a minute.ā€ You say as you get up out bed. You hang up the phone and make your way to your front door to let your friend in. "Fine, fine. Giveā€¦

This whole paragraph repeats itself

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