Hi everybody!

I just finished writing very first game named Back to Donkey Island! In it, you play as Gaya, a cursed aristocrat who suddenly wakes in her pirate grandfather’s body on the day of her royal marriage!
To lift this nasty curse and get her former life back, she must abandon her luxurious life and walk the pirate path she despises so much. Following a Voodoo Witch advice, she will become the leader of an incredibly odd crew: a gorilla gentleman, an undead rocker, a fast-aging Voodoo crone, and a ridiculous spokesman. Every single member has a story, and their experiences/interactions will help Gaya determine her final, true self.
Little by little, she’ll discover the truth about her hated grandfather, her life goals, and she will finally become her true self. Actually, she starts as a cursed lady in the body of a man she despises but through her actions and NPC interactions, the reader will decide the main character’s true self. I’d say the MC is definitely playersexual.
Inspired by the Monkey Island and the Pirates of the Caribbean franchises, this is a pirate-themed, hilarious adventure where you will face many funny challenges, for example: Insult Sword Fighting, Grog drinking contests, etc.
Today I finished it! It’s 9 Chapters long, about 80K words including commands.
I added 26 Achievements and you can toggle if you want to actually play with them popping up or ignoring them.
To play the demo, go here: https://dashingdon.com/go/7045
Thank you in advance for your feedback.
This is my very first time, so please be patient, but at the same time, don’t hold back! I’m looking forward to hearing from you about how I can improve the game.