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Soon as you select body type, a line still states ‘look down at your flat chest’. Should be changed to look down at your ‘muscular’, ‘lean’, or ‘whatever’ body. Page before breast size was added in.

The arms are sinewy, muscles subtly visible under smooth skin, while the chest is flat and firm, leading to a tight, defined abdomen.

This line right here needs addressed.

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Pointed

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Other then the grammar errors which is to be expected of an update this early. I cant stop admiring your work! This is definitely going on to my top 3 choice of script games! :heart_eyes:

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Thanks, it means a lot.

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In all honesty you deserve it! :wink: Keep up the Good work! :star_struck:

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I like the concept. “Struggling with inner demons”

I do however suggest running it through a grammar checker, or spell checker. There were…a lot.

The violent/action scenes so far have been really interesting so far, too.

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By the way, just a request: could you expand the save slots to say 8-10 to give a little more room to wiggle with? :upside_down_face:

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Wiggle no wiggling, wiggle no wiggling

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Noted

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Oh also theres an error at Dillon’s POV you need to check, instead of calling by the players name, she’s calling him “None” so look into that :wink:

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I’ll fix it

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now 07
now 07707×231 39.6 KB

A Trip to the garage

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Don’t bang your head on that trip or break a bone.

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How many ROs do you plan to bring in? (Just curious :yum: :upside_down_face:)

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I really haven’t planned that. As i keep on writing i think a few more ROs will appear but if i have to guess then maybe 5 in total.

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Im gonna address the elephant in the room and ask why every RO is black?, I’m not racist I’m black myself I’m just genuinely curious

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Hmmm. I don’t mind. Usually, I tend to romance the darker toned gals anyway.

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Cause we’ve met ROs only from East New Kingspire so far.

Lorewise East New Kingspire’s demographic largely consists of african americans and mexican americans.

We will meet ROs of different ethnicities in the next update.

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LMAO its alright! All of us have diverse tastes for people :wink: so asking for a diverse selection of ROs to choose from is alright :yum: and to be fair there were white gals in the update, like Jackie, Tyrells Girlfriend, though I dont know if the Author would make her an option in the later future :thinking: Im sure it would include alot of Drama but I dont wanna hurt poor Tyrell :disappointed_relieved:

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That basketball scene man you really cooked

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