To go along with the tournament, maybe a library for knowledge MCs, and a visit to some kind of zoo or bestiary for an animal MC? And then maybe options specifically for bonding/spending time with the apprentice? Not sure what for a magic MC though …
I’m sucker for fantasy geez! Popping in to say that Im thoroughly enjoying this, the pacing is just right and the anticipation for the reunion is agonizing ~ Cant wait to see more! Malina is just too darn adorable, although im slightly afraid of what shes like now~ ;-;
Yup, still working on it! Just … kind of slowly, not made better by a busy period at work, or me deciding that I need to rewrite a big chunk of one branch because it wasn’t working.
Status report: still to write is one long conversation in the neutral path, one conversation and wrap-up scene in the baron path, and the (rewritten because it wasn’t working) fight scene and a few linking scenes on the rebel path.
Delightful design. Pleasing and smooth to read. Letters just the right size. I would prefer next button to be centered, though.
Few things:
“Ah, that mountain air. So bracing!”
“Is that a wyvern?”
Hard to see here, but types of quotes are different: first one is more round, second one is standard. It jumps from one type to another through the text.
Silver: “Time to get back to the well”
Me: “This is all well and good, but what happened with Mal, did she love me back? Did we get married”
Silver: “There are far more important matters at hand…”
Me: “Your right, I want to see our first date!”
Silver: “You need to focus on…”
Me “Oh and our first kiss ”
Silver [facepalm]: "Why are you always so difficult…
Well, good choice, then.
Caught: error 69, something about memory question, I, unfortunately, closed the message. Occurred after attempting to tell stranger that you don’t believe their explanation about memory well not working properly. That part after death and taxes, met with rebels, if that matters.
Will be adding them as I go.