The dreams seem well integrated, and as for the part with Vin MC was sad that he tried to escape in the middle of night so no one would see his walk of shame. My MC, the shameless flirt loner, has never been in a real relationship before because everyone looks at her as the great awoken one and not a normal person. He couldn’t even be bothered to say he was going. MC had to break up with him.
On another note, How dare those rebels shoot my dog! (PS. The dog pet selection was ambiguous about its gender, so I named my dog a male name and had to restart and give the dog a female name.) I hope me and Fluffy can have our vengeance.