So, I just played through Awoken again and I liked it. There's a very charming WiP brewing in here. I kept liking the stranger, and the banter was nice, because it counters the stranger's stoicism with the MC's more fiery disposition.
I do think that, later on, it might be better to put a more developed writing. It might end up a little long-winded, but maybe it'll help establish characters better. Instead of "You entered the room", it could be "You carefully stepped inside, unsure of what to expect". It might be bad all the time, but at least I think you could take more character out of the setting.