Avatar of the Wolf -- BETA TESTERS NEEDED


You are the avatar of the Wolf, the living embodiment of one of the six gods worshiped by the people of the steppe. When Wolf is murdered, you are all that is left of his power; the heavens are turned upside down, and every human must fight for what the new world will look like.

Email me, jason AT choiceofgames for access. DO NOT SEND ME A MESSAGE THROUGH THE FORUM MAIL SYSTEM. When you send your EMAIL, include your forumname, your real name, and the game you want to test.

(You cannot be testing two games at once. Send feedback on one and you can apply to another.)

I will send you a link, a username, and a password.

Return feedback TO ME. Preferably part of the same thread, rather than a new email.

I’m looking for “high level” and “low level” feedback. Not mid-level feedback.

Low-level = typos and continuity errors. A continuity error is when a character’s gender flips, or someone comes back from the dead, or you run into a plotline that just doesn’t make sense (because it’s probably a coding error).

For these low-level issues, SCREENSHOTS are VERY HELPFUL. If you see a problem, take a screenshot, or copy and paste the text that is in error, and email that. Also, the “BUG” button is great; but if you use BUG, make sure to say in your email who you are, so I can give you credit for the report.

“High level” feedback has to do with things like plot, pacing, and characters. “Scene A didn’t work for me because x, y, and z,” is useful feedback. “B character was entirely unsympathetic, because u, w, and v,” is also useful feedback.

“Mid-level” feedback describes things like grammar, style, or the use of commas. As I said above, I do not want mid-level feedback. In particular, DO NOT WRITE TO ME ABOUT COMMAS.

“I had a great time and saw only a few spelling errors,” is not useful feedback. In fact, it’s the sort of thing that results in you not being given access to future betas.

Some examples of useful high-level feedback:

In Choice of the Dragon, you get to choose what type of wings you have: leather or scaled. Someone wrote in and asked about having feathered wings. Great suggestion! Done!

In “The Eagle’s Heir,” someone asked about Eugenie. They said that the romance moved too quickly–because she only appeared in the last third of the game–and wished they could have had an opportunity to meet her earlier. So the authors added an opportunity to meet her and start the romance earlier in the game (in a scene that already existed).

In “Demon Mark: A Russian Saga” several people commented on how the PC’s parents were unsympathetic, so the authors added a choice or two to deepen the relationship with the parents in the first chapter, to help better establish their characters.

Similarly, pointing out a specific choice and saying, “this is who I imagined my character was at this particular moment, and none of these options seemed right for me. I would have liked an option to do X instead,” is really helpful feedback.

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FYI, I’m not accepting new testers until I get an updated set of files. Once the update comes in (hopefully today) I’ll send out more acceptances.


There is a new draft up!

  • Typos throughout
  • A bunch of code-pronoun errors fixed
  • More opportunities to build affinities with the different gods.
  • Rebalancing to make certain endings more accessible.


There’s a new draft up!

  • Typos throughout.
  • Romance expansion.
  • More balancing to conclusion (still needs work).
  • More interaction with Lyall at the first encounter.


And, like an idiot, I don’t think I actually pushed the patch until now.


There’s a new draft up!

• Added more opportunities to increase pantheon_regard.
• More dialog with Ghazal.
• More interaction with Lyall.
• Added more non-violent options.


There is a new draft up!

  • Textual changes throughout.
  • Made it easier to meet and ally with the Risers (particularly in chapter 8).
  • Numerous bugfixes.

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