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Awww got to wait till December for a new update :disappointed:

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@seabean
Found some minor​ things

Summary

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Should be “see”

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Should be “your”, the capitalization

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Is “know” supposed to be “now”?

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I don’t think “at” is necessary, but it may just me

And I agree with @Baam, the path and meeting with Emilia is feels rushed. Also, (not sure if this already asked or not) are mc that choose Shadow(?) Can still help josen?

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