Ashenmaw - Dragons of Marrowoods (WIP) (Dragon Fantasy) (Minor Bugfix 01/08/26 77k total, 32k per read)

oh absolutely.

granted, it’d be more nuzzling them in either case, as right now the whelp’s arms are unfortunately short

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I think +/- or ++/ - - for slight or strong increase or decrease works better, with an explanation for it in the stat page. For example, saying “Vaelias relationship ++” is better than saying “Vaelias relationship strong increase”, which takes up more space.

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It’s nice to see the other flights get a sibling even if the grey technically had two. Maybe we can help find out what happened. Wasn’t expecting another time accident again for one. You think they would stop screwing around with weird stuff involved with the two who caused this mess unless this one is a separate incident.

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Separate incident.

[insert two nickles meme here]

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Little heads up:
I’m currently at around 15k words, once the 25k goal is at least reached I’ll put the new update onto Patreon.
I’ll let you know.
:memo::dragon:

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Page 1 of about 60 something right now for ch3 for those curious how I write stuff.
(technically 120 pages, each page is double sided (small sized blog) so each ‘full page’ is a total of around 300 words, bringing us to ~18k total)

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And this is how the above then looked in code:

Summary
*temp whut ""

Somewhere partway through Vaelias traversing the halls and hallways of the museum wing with long strides you've squirmed out of his arms and fluttered onto his shoulder.

Mostly due to him holding you maybe a little tighter than comfortable or strictly necessary.

The other advantage your new perch provides you with is the much better view of the contents of the museum as you head past them.

What is, @{(vael <25) maybe|however}, a bit worrying is how Vaelias has started wringing his hands nervously the moment you were out of them.

"I should [i]not[/i] have left you with Lord Padamonos like that," he mutters.

*choice
 #"But you did." @{showstats [b][i](Vaelias: - )[/i][/b]|}
  *set whut "But you did,"
  *set vael %-10
  *goto ch3startnegative
 #"It wasn't so bad, he's @{(flight =5) funny. And he's my father|funny}." @{showstats [b][i](Vaelias: + )[/i][/b]|}
  *set whut "It wasn't so bad, he's @{(flight =5) funny. And he's my father|funny},"
  *set vael %+10
  *goto ch3startpositive
 #"No harm done, I don't mind." @{showstats [b][i](Vaelias: + )[/i][/b]|}
  *set whut "No harm done, I don't mind,"
  *set vael %+10
  *goto ch3startpositive
 #"Bit late bemoaning spilled milk." @{showstats [b][i](Vaelias: - )[/i][/b]|}
  *set whut "Bit late bemoaning spilled milk,"
  *set vael %-10
  *goto ch3startnegative

*label ch3startnegative
"${whut}" you grumble, and your companion flinches.

"I wasn't thinking straight, alright?" he defends himself. "I would have never have done something like this otherwise."

*goto ch3startcont

*label ch3startpositive
"${whut}" you go, nudging Vaelias's ear.

Vaelias groans, a little defeated.

"Still, he's not entirely someone one should leave a newly-hatched with."

*goto ch3startcont
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Do I give the whelp the option to throw a book at Phyron?

A book that is about the winter whelp’s size and weight?

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Oh, hell, yes please! Preferably a heavy book with very hard cover. :blue_book:

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Yeah definitely even if we get punished for it. He started this whole thing with us so of course we want to do some things back

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mind you, the book IS the whelp’s size and weight.
so be warned :wink:

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Appropriate ordinance requested

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Happy new year, winter whelps.

Pushed a small bug- and continuityfix update.

  • Fixed continuity for the Storm Elves
  • Fixed continuity for the flights’ powers/domains
  • Some minor stats adjustments.

Still got quite a bit to do, like going over the whole shebang to streamline how stuff is spelt (I think atm I got 3 spellings for storm elves >_> ), iron out some wording.

Thus, feedback is greatly requested.

One specific bit of feedback needed is for an early choice when you meet Astia. Right now climbing onto Alerhon’s tail reduces tactical, but looking at it again it feels like it should actually grant is increase it as you are making sure you are seen before taking a bow.

Thoughts?

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I agree that it should increase tactical, I remember finding it odd that it decreased instead since I was trying to be extra polite by being seen first

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Yeah. I’m starting to think I might have actually planned it that way around initially, then messed something up and forgot things :frowning:
So, thanks :3

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Does that mean we will just flatten ourselves with that :sweat_smile:

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The risk you took was calculated, but being a day old makes you terrible at math

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Quick question:

Anyone interested in twitch streams of me working on the next update at some point? I got a lot to type up

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sure but i’ll check if twitch is working for me. it’s been a while since i used it

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Welp, time to do some strength training so the MC can lift that big, heavy book and throw it at Phyron without issues. :flexed_biceps:

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