# Ashenmaw - Dragons of Marrowoods (WIP) (Dragon Fantasy) FEEDBACK NEEDED

**URL:** <https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173>\
**Category:** Works In Progress\
**Tags:** nonbinary-inclusive, gender-choice, low-fantasy\
**Created:** [December 1, 2024, 5:29pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173 "2024-12-01T17:29:11Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
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**Author:** ![eveelution](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/eveelution/32/229648_2.png) [@eveelution](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/eveelution)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2026, 9:26pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/603 "2026-07-09T21:26:03Z")

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A lunch break sketch of Vaelias; I will slowly work through some of the other characters as I can.

 ![17836323437435950835804891390304](https://global.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/original/4X/a/5/5/a5561c8f79c610a5cb884cfd94416b42a52ada78.jpeg)

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [July 9, 2026, 9:49pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/604 "2026-07-09T21:49:10Z")

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oooooh 😃 very nice.  
Looking forward (hope the descriptions in the next update won’t hinder you ^^; )

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [July 15, 2026, 3:26am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/605 "2026-07-15T03:26:45Z")

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Thoughts on a potential character/RO who’d always have the same gender as the MC picks initially in Chapter 1?  
Had an idea while writing.

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**Author:** ![Abe](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/abe/32/17347_2.png) [@Abe](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Abe)\
**Post date:** [July 15, 2026, 1:04pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/606 "2026-07-15T13:04:52Z")

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i am open to it.

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**Author:** ![Christopher\_Bull](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/christopher_bull/32/106136_2.png) [@Christopher\_Bull](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Christopher_Bull)\
**Post date:** [July 16, 2026, 12:22am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/607 "2026-07-16T00:22:24Z")

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Sure why not.

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**Author:** ![Uriel224](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/u/13edae/32.png) [@Uriel224](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Uriel224)\
**Post date:** [July 16, 2026, 4:25am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/608 "2026-07-16T04:25:44Z")

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Im very very happy to hear from this one again.^^

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**Author:** ![jjc73](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jjc73/32/223924_2.png) [@jjc73](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/jjc73)\
**Post date:** [July 16, 2026, 11:06am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/609 "2026-07-16T11:06:35Z")

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As soon as I read that. I knew.

But my brain tuned to something weird.

"This one likes … This one is happy … This one sends regards … "

Yay, Translucent ones that worship Protheans as God’s.

Yep. That is immediately where my brain went instead of, this WIP.

I love Dragons too.

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [July 16, 2026, 11:08am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/610 "2026-07-16T11:08:19Z")

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Feel free to elaborate 😃

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**Author:** ![jjc73](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/jjc73/32/223924_2.png) [@jjc73](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/jjc73)\
**Post date:** [July 16, 2026, 11:17am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/611 "2026-07-16T11:17:39Z")

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I will have to check out the updates I missed. As I know I saw more was added compared to my first read. I had apparently not put this on watch until, some few posts ago.

Ill have to read again to catch bit more.

The elaborate Mass Effect stuff, I’ll keep in its threads of Video Game.

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [July 16, 2026, 11:37am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/612 "2026-07-16T11:37:00Z")

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I have never played Mass Effect, so those references went right over my head ^^;

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**Author:** ![Uriel224](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/u/13edae/32.png) [@Uriel224](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Uriel224)\
**Post date:** [July 19, 2026, 9:34am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/613 "2026-07-19T09:34:41Z")

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Liked the new aditions and to meet some familiar faces along the way.^^

Looking forward to what comes next!

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [July 23, 2026, 8:34pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/614 "2026-07-23T20:34:54Z")

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working on a minor update that will add a bit of buffer between the question sessions in ch1.

post as mini update or wait till i have the rest typed up?

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**Author:** ![Abe](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/abe/32/17347_2.png) [@Abe](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Abe)\
**Post date:** [July 24, 2026, 7:38am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/615 "2026-07-24T07:38:58Z")

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i can wait for a little longer.

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [September 11, 2026, 5:52am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/616 "2026-09-11T05:52:56Z")

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> For a moment the grown-ups concentrate on their tea, and you watch some very long birds fly by overhead, craning your neck in curiosity.
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> “Ah, the noodlegeese are already returning,” Padamonos observes, and Sarimyne shoves him playfully.
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> “Oh, don’t you already start putting nonsense in the child’s head,” she laughs and looks at you. “Those are green-fanned ibises, a species native to these parts, and sacred to several local cultures.”

working on the buffer bits for the questions in ch1 one and… Paddy, i need you to stahp

(also, yes, this means I’m almost-ish done with the next update)

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**Author:** ![Christopher\_Bull](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/christopher_bull/32/106136_2.png) [@Christopher\_Bull](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Christopher_Bull)\
**Post date:** [September 14, 2026, 10:34am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/617 "2026-09-14T10:34:34Z")

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Lol. Its just like paddy to cause mischief.

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [September 18, 2026, 11:06am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/618 "2026-09-18T11:06:49Z")

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Seeing both Rhidi and Verdamiru are noodles (in their true form), I must decide who is the bigger noodle.

Which is harder than it sounds.

Gray dragons dwell in the desert and akin to desert snakes… albeit with thick toes like camels.

Green dragons commonly dwell in trees like anaconda, vines and squirrels…

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**Author:** ![OscarKane](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/oscarkane/32/125404_2.png) [@OscarKane](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/OscarKane)\
**Post date:** [September 18, 2026, 12:51pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/619 "2026-09-18T12:51:31Z")

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This absolutely scratches the itch for good dragon themed reading and I love my perpetually confused time traveling brother.

Definitely looking forward to being able to do more than hang out wrapped in other peoples clothing.

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [October 2, 2026, 5:58pm UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/620 "2026-10-02T17:58:44Z")

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little head’s up:  
FINALLY done with the library scene and the new tidbits in the question sessions… now to do the rest of these chapters \>:V

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**Author:** ![Christopher\_Bull](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/christopher_bull/32/106136_2.png) [@Christopher\_Bull](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/Christopher_Bull)\
**Post date:** [October 4, 2026, 3:15am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/621 "2026-10-04T03:15:52Z")

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Been looking forward to this.

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**Author:** ![MeltingPenguins](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/choiceofgames/user_avatar/forum.choiceofgames.com/meltingpenguins/32/255855_2.png) [@MeltingPenguins](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/u/MeltingPenguins)\
**Post date:** [October 4, 2026, 10:56am UTC](https://forum.choiceofgames.com/t/ashenmaw-dragons-of-marrowoods-wip-dragon-fantasy-feedback-needed/162173/622 "2026-10-04T10:56:25Z")

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Well it’s NOT updated yet, I’m working on it

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