oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
It was quite short but i love it so far. I already love my brother lol.
I just have a few questions and suggestions, if I may
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Are you thinking of making the story more explicit or keeping it PG? nothing against either of them, just wanted to know what I can expect!
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You mentioned that gender roles are in effect, will there be an option to oppose those gender roles when MC can?
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Last one is a suggestion, maybe just add some spacing on the paragraphs and speaking lines. It gets a bit hard to read a little. I do understand that this is your first game and you’re still learning to code it all so no rush with that! Just pointing it out.
Overall I’m excited for the premise of this and will definitely be excitedly anticipating every update! Good luck!
When looking at this spice level chart, I’m thinking that the story will be “Warm”
Yes, this will be an option. I’m not sure how or when I’ll implement it, but I do want to.
I’ve actually done this! It’ll be implemented in the next update
Thanks for answering my questions! This makes me even more excited!
Good luck and I’m rooting for you and your story!
- An update every week
- An update every other week
- An update for every chapter
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Now that the semester is over, I’ll be able to get some good writing in. I’m hoping to finish chapter one soon (and something else that I really shouldn’t have started…)
You got all my favorite tropes!!! I can’t wait to play through different RO routes
So excited, can’t wait to read more
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