Ashbourne Hall (WIP)

I’m really excited about the premise! I also am into all of the advertised tropes. :slight_smile: Arranged marriage especially! It’s my favorite.

Are you really attached to only using preset names? I think a lot of people will want to be able to set custom names.

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I’m glad you like it! I’m excited about all those tropes too.
I tried using the insert text command, but it didn’t work for me. I’m going to try to figure it out though. I know I like putting in my own name

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This sounds really interesting. I haven’t had time to read it yet, but I’m excited about the premise. Arranged marriage is one of my favorite tropes.

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When you try and “push past your emotions” while first talking to your father this appears


I don’t know if the screen shot will work but we’ll see

I updated the demo to fix some bugs

https://dashingdon.com/play/anna-b/ashbourne-hall/mygame/

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Love the RO tropes and I like what you have so far. First things I noticed though; on the first page of text where your brother asks if you’re alright ‘Quiet’ is capitalized when it should be lower case, and I would suggest on the coding to replace your line breaks with just blank lines. The line breaks aren’t spacing out the words so on mobile it’s a long wall of text, you can correct that by just doing the blank lines or adding an extra *line_break line to actually space them out.

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Hey there! Really excited how this will turn out! I just wanted to point out that persuasion and awkward in the stats page are spelt wrong.

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I’m not kidding, are you?

This is already fantastic, and I can’t wait for more updates!

The romance-related tropes that are available to us really excite me.

But…I can’t name my mc?! :frowning:

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I’m going to try to figure that out for the next update on Saturday. It didn’t work when I first started the project

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What issue did you have?

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For those wondering, I just figured out how to let you pick your own name! So that will be included in Saturday’s update.

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I like it so far! The setup seems really cool.

For readability purposes, you may want to add some hard breaks after each paragraph. There are a few punctuation issues, too. If you want any help cleaning them up, I’d be happy to help you!

Can’t wait to see more of it!

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you won me over in the “arranged marriage” :heart_eyes_cat:

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Oh, no. Arranged marriage and brother’s best friend—I’m in danger. :')

This is always a very good concept. I can’t wait to see how it goes!

Some hard breaks would be appreciated! The closeness of each paragraph makes it hard to focus for most individuals, especially since there’s no indentation capability.

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I’m glad you’re into it so far! I’ve added some spaces in the text, so it should be easier to read when I update

The premise sounds cool.

Obvsly there’s not much to judge by yet…

You do need to paragraph thought, it’s confusing when all the text is just bunched up together.

oooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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It was quite short but i love it so far. I already love my brother lol.

I just have a few questions and suggestions, if I may
  • Are you thinking of making the story more explicit or keeping it PG? nothing against either of them, just wanted to know what I can expect!

  • You mentioned that gender roles are in effect, will there be an option to oppose those gender roles when MC can?

  • Last one is a suggestion, maybe just add some spacing on the paragraphs and speaking lines. It gets a bit hard to read a little. I do understand that this is your first game and you’re still learning to code it all so no rush with that! Just pointing it out.

Overall I’m excited for the premise of this and will definitely be excitedly anticipating every update! Good luck!

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When looking at this spice level chart, I’m thinking that the story will be “Warm”

Yes, this will be an option. I’m not sure how or when I’ll implement it, but I do want to.

I’ve actually done this! It’ll be implemented in the next update

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Thanks for answering my questions! This makes me even more excited!

Good luck and I’m rooting for you and your story!

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