I’m glad you like it! I’m excited about all those tropes too.
I tried using the insert text command, but it didn’t work for me. I’m going to try to figure it out though. I know I like putting in my own name
Love the RO tropes and I like what you have so far. First things I noticed though; on the first page of text where your brother asks if you’re alright ‘Quiet’ is capitalized when it should be lower case, and I would suggest on the coding to replace your line breaks with just blank lines. The line breaks aren’t spacing out the words so on mobile it’s a long wall of text, you can correct that by just doing the blank lines or adding an extra *line_break line to actually space them out.
For readability purposes, you may want to add some hard breaks after each paragraph. There are a few punctuation issues, too. If you want any help cleaning them up, I’d be happy to help you!
Oh, no. Arranged marriage and brother’s best friend—I’m in danger. :')
This is always a very good concept. I can’t wait to see how it goes!
Some hard breaks would be appreciated! The closeness of each paragraph makes it hard to focus for most individuals, especially since there’s no indentation capability.
It was quite short but i love it so far. I already love my brother lol.
I just have a few questions and suggestions, if I may
Are you thinking of making the story more explicit or keeping it PG? nothing against either of them, just wanted to know what I can expect!
You mentioned that gender roles are in effect, will there be an option to oppose those gender roles when MC can?
Last one is a suggestion, maybe just add some spacing on the paragraphs and speaking lines. It gets a bit hard to read a little. I do understand that this is your first game and you’re still learning to code it all so no rush with that! Just pointing it out.
Overall I’m excited for the premise of this and will definitely be excitedly anticipating every update! Good luck!