I’m a long-time lurker here and have played most of the games, official or not, here and enjoyed most of them. I am impressed by the quality of writing here.
Anyways, for a long while now i’ve been thinking about trying my own Choicescript game. I had originally gone for a Zompocalypse game, but that genre seems pretty well covered, so i’ve changed to a sci-fi game. My game at the moment is extremely limited, just some scene-setting and only a few screens long at the moment (some of which are unfinished). My hope is that by having it open to public testing it will help motivate me to continue working on it and help me improve me writing with your criticism.
Please feel free to post criticism of the few pages I have so far and offer tips for my writing