Apex Predators (WIP) (Updated 8 March 2019)

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#468

Thank you very much! :grin:

I wouldn’t get your hopes up, lol! This is just a side project for when I have writer’s block: my priority is currently my main project, Shepherds of Haven. :slight_smile: But when that’s done I will turn my full attention to this!

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#469

It’s not the name, we just haven’t seen anything to do with it

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#470

Whoa. You are incredibly talented. I read both Apex and Sheperd’s (a few times) today, and am hooked! Can’t wait to read the finished products and all of your future endeavours. Rock On! :heart:

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#471

Ah, thank you so much, @Jender! What a wonderfully kind thing to say! :heart: Thanks for checking the demos out, work on ShoH should resume soon. Thank you! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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#472

More my god I never knew I wanted this until I read the premise and played the demo my god I need more

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#473

Yeah I’m soooo ready for this to come out!!!

#474

Nice! Enthralling writing, interesting MC, awesome setting (vampires, supernatural entities, zombie apocalypse - whats not to love?) I’m really looking forward to more of this! Thanx for sharing it with us :slight_smile:

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#475

Thanks for the kind comments @NixD , @TheoVD, and @King_Skela_Ugg!! :slight_smile:

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#476

This was so good! The premise is amazing, the writing had me hooked from the start, and I love the voice you’ve chosen for the MC. There may have been a lot of immature giggling at the bit where the MC gets all sulky over failing to seduce Conway. Stupid cellphones. :pouting_cat:

I will definitely be stalking this WIP.

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#477

Thank you so much, @Hannya! It might take a while to see an update on this since I’m working on my main WIP, Shepherds of Haven, but I’m so happy you gave this a try and enjoyed it!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I’m hoping to put a new spin on the zombie apocalypse!

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#478

cockblocked by a god damn phone. RIP. :rofl:

oh i also found a typo? i dunno if anyone pointed it out or you know about it or whatever already

Summary

After a moment, Nick shakes his head and blinks.“Come I come in?” he repeats again, as if you hadn’t spoken.

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#479

Ooh thanks @nulCat!! I hadn’t caught that, thanks for the keen eye!!

#480

Wow, that was REALLY good. Very immersive. I guess now I’ll have to look forward to two of your works lol.

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#481

Thank you very much lol! This one’s on the backburner for now but I’m so glad you enjoyed it! :vampire::purple_heart::black_heart:

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#482

OOPS, what’s this?

I updated this demo, against all odds, lol!

The prologue has actually been done for a while, but I never uploaded it because I wasn’t satisfied with how it ended. However, after reading it through again, I figure it’s good enough and I can always change it to fit Chapter 1 whenever I make headway on that.

I also discovered that, to my horror, I accidentally deleted the original files of this game (thank you @dashingdon!): recovering them from dashingdon made the format a little wonky, so if you spot any weird symbols in place of “…” or “–”, please take a screenshot or let me know! Thank you and enjoy!

Edit: Sorry for anyone who started playing, I had to reupload the files due to an error I already found! Sorry if this caused you to restart!

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#483

Le Gasp!!! :scream:

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#484

I don’t know if this was a problem before hand or not I don’t remember, but I found this error when clicking the stats button

#485

Ah, sorry about that! I’ll fix that ASAP!

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#486

There seems to be an error for no matter what you choose with Nick at the concert.

#487

Hmm, it worked for me the first time, but doesn’t now. If you’ll give me a moment I’ll reupload the whole thing from scratch!

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