Just played through the playtest... I really like it so far!
I found a few minor typos along the way...
You simply assumed that you would wake up at home, in your familiar bed, to find it was all dream.
Should be "...a dream"
Now, with reality washing you in it's regal, amaranthine light
This is the wrong tense, should be its
Sekk smiles back and pats your on the shoulder. "My pleasure, muffin."
There's something very kind about him, but also a hint on condescension in everything he says.
Should be either "pats your shoulder" or "pats you on the shoulder"
Also, should be of
Overall, I really like the feel, it's very reminiscent of Mass Effect, Esperith seems pretty similar to Liara... She was one of my favorite characters from that series...