After The Storm- Coming December 3rd!

You got me, my first language is Portuguese, though I’m curious as to how you could tell! And no, the gender option you choose has no effect on the story :slight_smile: Thanks for playing and responding!

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Ah, very nice! I thought that might be exactly the case. Call it writer’s (or reader’s) intuition :wink:

More precisely though, it’s because Portuguese is also my native tongue, and with the nature of a couple of the spelling mistakes I pointed out in my feedback form combined with wording choices and your name… that’s where my guess came from! :relaxed:

I don’t think a native English speaker would be able to pin point it that far (though I might be wrong!). You’re clearly quite well versed in English, and you have a nice style! Look forward to seeing what you may still have in store to share.

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Obrigada! :smile:

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@Luiza Ok, I just finished the game and… HOLY SHIT! That was amazing. I loved how much my actions were able to impact the world, and this is now one of my favorite games.

Edit#(bazillion): I removed all suggestions and submitted a feedback form.

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I love settlement building games. Great work. : )

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Updated! I added more scenes with the characters, as many of you suggested. Let me know your thoughts!

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Uhm, I just sent a one big review on it, please dont be mad, I just really liked it, probably something that didnt go in it was that I just read on your OP about just making a world you can live in, and after a nice playthrough, I figured my guy getting rich after he developed a very nice power source which helped normality come back and all was so cool. At least you dont have to choose between being rich but a dick to everyone or a poor charitable soul who didnt do anything other than give, so you can do stuff that works in everyone’s favor for pragmatic reasons, and its perfect.
Another Ted Talk, sorry.

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I loved this game when it first got posted and I love it after the update even more!

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Just read through your ted talk! Honestly the fact that you cared about the game enough to take the time to write all that out means a lot to me, so never apologize for long reviews! Thank you for the honest feedback.

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I just played the demo and I :heart: it. My compassionate MC is all about making the world a better place. Put a smile on my face :blush: Thank you.

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This is so sweet and charming. I loved every moment of this. My heart aaaahh :green_heart::green_heart:

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Updated 7/5/2020! Thanks to everyone who responded and gave feedback! Check out the new illustrations!

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I was kind of hoping you could lone wolf it the hole game shame. And how come you can’t stop your self from get getting Ousted by your own people like really i would just burn the settlement to the ground or hang the rebels from the gates of the settlement when they do it i found the place and built it.

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Great story, already looks like a finished product. Just a little more polish.

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By lone wolf it the whole game, do you mean not starting the settlement? Because that’s where most of my plot is :sweat_smile:. As for being ousted, there is a scenario where you have enough allies to overwhelm your opposition. But you’re right, that part could use more fleshing out. Thanks for playing!

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Question for everyone (spoilers for part 3) Should I give mc the option to adopt a child and raise them as a single parent if they’re not in a relationship at the end of part 3? I want mc to have devoted time to starting a family in order to have the option to have kids, but at the same time it doesn’t make sense that everyone wouldn’t have that option.

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This was really fun to read, I loved every part of it and was super pleasantly surprised when it didn’t end until it actually ended lol I expected a “this is the end of the demo” message at the end of part one and was dreading it from then on but it never came :grin:

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Thanks! This is my first time writing a cyoa game (first time writing anything tbh) so I figured it’d be better to post the whole thing to get as much feedback as possible.

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It seems pretty well polished for a first go at it honestly. As far as feedback I’d have to go through it again honestly I was too interested in the story itself to really be on the lookout for anything helpful :sweat_smile: anyway I hope you plan on writing more in the future because you’re certainly a natural! Wish you the best :grin:

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No i mean lone wolf the settlement why not take over the guys cabin you know kill him and take it then build around it or just build the settlement your self why share what you found build traps a wall get yourself a gun things like that and shoot anybody that tries to take it simple and if people are going to take it rig the place with some bombs so nobody else can have it that is what i would do.

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