I just found this but I’m very much looking forward to the project!
Hey, we get free entertainment. Life comes first! I hope school went well!
Looking forward to seeing it!
Whoa, don’t worry. Grades first, game second. Keep up the good work, man.
Ooh, sweet, more Danae and Hanes time! Don’t apologize! School happens Don’t rush, and take care of yourself too. I don’t know about you, but school is hugely draining physically, mentally and emotionally for me.
Happy to hear back from you, and don’t feel too pressured! Your health and well-being is important, and you should focus on it. We’ll be fine on our end.
Danae is such a sweet cinnamon roll but Morgana is such a bae. How will I choose?
Yes! I was aching to save Morgana already
That… cliffhanger!!! [ * Excitable screaming. ] What? WHAT?! What do I do now? I wanna save Morgana! It might just be a case of White Knight syndrome, and the whole convincing a Greater Djinn to submit to me, but I really want to help Morgana! I like her!
I’m glad I picked Ray to talk to. I like that he’s introduced and portrayed as an apathetic character, but he behaves as almost anything but in scenes with him. I feel like it speaks to how he regards the MC.
Anyway, this was a really engaging demonstration! I can feel a fair bit of replayability in it, because there were a lot of choices that I wanted to make, but either couldn’t because I lacked the capabilities/funds, or another choice appealed to me more.
For example, I am fascinated by the notion of “Darkness” spellcraft, and even though I didn’t so much as touch it, I can definitely picture myself going back and making it my boon.
Please, keep up the good work! …but not at the expense of your health!
I still think that she is playing with your mind tho. This moment when Anna asked her why she trust you so much.
Dark magic is cool tho - hiding your true potential from your friends and this moment when everyone think that you are a deamon slayer when, in reality you just used deamon and this whole drama to become even more powerful
I was very close to tacking on… “I hope this isn’t all some elaborate trap.” But I thought that would put way too much emphasis on the protagonist. They’re not even out of, what basically amounts to, prep school.
Merry Christmas, everyone!
Chapter 5 is now out.
As usual, please look out for any grammar errors I may have overlooked.
Sidenote: Before Chapter 6 is released, I plan on making extensive revisions to both Chapter 1 and 2.
Expect these revisions within the coming week.
Gasp
An early Christmas present??
Thank you for more of this lovely tale! Truly a fine Christmas present.
Ode to Joy starts to play
Overall great chapter. Hiding your black magic from anna and morgana, destroying your enemy with you demonic/mechanic friend was cool
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
I will fix this error as soon as I’m near my computer again.
Wow, thanks so much. The chapter was great and Bernard seemed lile a tragic figure and I’m sure we’ll meet them again. I was able to create a 50 Creation and Spellcraft Mage xD.
An early Christmas present! You are too kind!
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Enjoying going as an old school White Mage. Sure I can heal and barrier. I can also fold you up like an old wallet.