Oh okay, thanks for the reply 
I am really loving the dark magic and the summoning ability along with the combat.
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HAHAHA I made the great fire demon bend the knee to my will without a contract MuHaumuamauahahahah
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Nice work! I like it!
I think that if you use Darkness in the battle against the Demon, somebody (like the headmaster) should make an issue of it. I mean, circumstances are as they are, so you might escape serious punishment, but you are openly using illegal magic.
Also, have you considered using fairmath on personality changes?
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Good demo, looking forward to chapter 3.
I would second that, at least at certain points, I could see the mc being able to use it once or twice during the fight depending if debris from the fight was blocking peopleâs view or not.
Also I have a question.
The contract that you can make with the demon is it a soul contract?
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Typos and other problems
One thing I noticed throughout is that you often switch between past and present tense, and occasionally between first and second person. Iâm afraid I couldnât list every instance these occurred, though.
Hane pulled out a piece of paper and started writing on it. When he was finished, he handed it to you. It was his cellphone number, âYou know. If you ever wanted to talk.â He was clearly nervous about doing this, but you were more than willing to have his number.
Towards the end of class, you and Hane swapped cellphone numbers. Aside from personal reasons, it was also so that you could assist each other regarding your conjuration class.
So, he gives me his phone number twice? 
How did the other students get out if theyâre unconscious? And why are they there? I thought Hane was having a one-to-one lesson.
However, itâs eyes were completely black, with no iris; and you could see its enraged expression in full view.
The first âitâsâ should be âitsâ (like the second one).
When you were in the hospital, Ray called you everyday. When he heard about your injuries, he sent you several small gifts of candy and gift cards. You smiled, although you were stuck in the hospital, at least Rayâs letters and cards kept you entertained.
When you had fully recovered, your parents came to pick you up. Seeing you made your mother cry from joy. Later on, you learned that your mother wanted to visit you as early as possible, but was prevented by the police and the school.
So, donât my parents get to call me and send me stuff?
I think one problem with this is that it feels a little rushed. Iâd like at least a few more days to get to know Hane before the date and fight, and Iâd like some time with the MCâs parents as well (maybe I could introduce Ray or Hane to them?)
I did like the fact that through most of the battle, I could use my âremedialâ subject (conjuration) to fight⌠(although then, it was remedial because, like Hane, I was too powerful to control itâŚ)
I was also disappointed that I was forced to dislike Haneâs (admittedly poor) attempt at humour. Couldnât I just pretend to like it?
Anyway, itâs looking ever-more interesting; good luck with the game. 
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I agree with many of these points such as the use of dark magic having more attention drawn to it, and especially the addition of character interaction with friends and family. Especially with how much the MCâs parents shape them near the beginning.
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WoW nice game, remember me a little of âlife of wizardâ i like games who you can be a necromancer or dark magic user.
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Another thought: maybe the opening prologue could be given as a lesson in class? That way, the player could choose to listen (and even ask questions), or to mess around with their friend, if they want to. At the moment, it feels a little like an infodump.
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Darkness will become an issue in the next chapter. You were only able to use dark magic against the demon since the only witness was Adeline, who is seriously injured and was busy protecting herself.
Chapter 3 will rely almost entirely on fair math increase for both personality and stats. Currently testing it to make sure progress is neither too slow nor too fast.
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Thank you for the feedback. The contract made with the demon is entirely one-sided and only benefits you. The demon is essentially indentured to you. This was done in exchange for letting Ulik live.
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Thank you for the feedback.
Iâll see if I can change your characterâs reaction to his humor. It wonât be a major choice, but it will hopefully add some depth to the conversation with him.
Also, I might add an extra storyline before your date with Hane to see if it will even out the pacing.
Your parents will get a bigger role in the next chapter, and both Hane and your school friend will meet them.
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Thank you for the advice. Iâll see about adding an extra storyline for your characterâs parents at the beginning of chapter 2
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Yes, I was afraid it might feel this way. Iâll revise the story so you can ask Professor Adeline questions before class. You will receive information at your leisure rather than through an info dump.
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Quick question: Is Hane always going to be the first RO or is there someway to get a female RO first? I donât really care since in the end, I can just wait until a female RO appears, but I was just curious.
Hane will always be the first romance.
However, there are potentially two female RO in chapter three. Your school friend, if you chose female, and a new character youâve never met. The upcoming female RO is only interested in men, however. But your school friend will not have a preference.
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Ah, good to know. Thanks for the quick reply!
Interesting, I have a follow up question.
Is Ulik strong for a demon? I know that he is a greater djinn but considering he lost pretty badly to the 12 year old mc⌠It makes me wonder if he is just weak or if the mc is just that strong already.
Ulik fought Adeline and the students beforehand. He wasnât harmed, but he was already tired from fighting. By the time your character arrives, you already had the upper hand.
Iâll revise the story to make sure this is emphasized.
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