Never He is a contemptible, morally bankrupt, Gary Stu.
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So, on the one hand, you’ve got a really cute nickname. 
On the other hand, @Dark_Stalker will never like him (or, let’s face it, 95% of the rest of the cast 
). So, Solem still looks like the better name. 
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Hey, just because I want to kill them doesn’t mean I don’t like them
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Of course. Trying to kill them could be a sign of courtship, after all if they can’t handle even a 2/3ds strength attempt on their life they are not going to be worth the time, and will not be as fun to tease…
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So… that makes Solem the best, right?
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Actually he’d be tied with Amelia in that regard since she just transfers everything. But he is also white aligned so that’s docking points and his name, his name annoys me, I want to hurt him but can’t… (Amelia only get’s a free pas because she gives it to someone) etc…
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And because she’s perfect
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Some times I worry that what I’m writing is “too real” with the demons devouring children, demon trying to make you kill your self, and now I just did a scene were the MC gets attempted mugged and if MC is female/male looks like mom the mugger will…try to do more? But of course won’t cuz I mean? Don’t mess with a witch? Plus that’s when your familiar saves you and becomes your familiar. But yah I worry about that some times. Like what if the suicide talk just affects the reader mentally??? Don’t want to be responsible for pushing them off the edge.
At least I have a lot of happy scenes tho. I guess?
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I guess you should probably put a trigger warning in the original post, especially for the suicide talk. (Well, once you post the demo, that is.)
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[quote=“OracleD3, post:3056, topic:20209”]
demon trying to make you kill your self
[/quote]Happens to me everyday
If you’re that worried put a content warning.
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If you want to sell your story on Apple platforms (through their app store) you will need to adhere to their standards - which are quite puritanical in many ways. Just be aware of your plans in that regard when writing.
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Well, for me it did happen. But we call them “bullies”.
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Idk the standards!? Oh man what if I wright a story that won’t be able to go on App Store 
. Now I’m worried. Guess I’ll just let you guys decide once you read the demo.
I was bullied a lot in school all started because I liked Pokémon. Just emotional bullying tho. Hope I don’t go too far with the bullies in the beginning.
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Here’s another information: thinking of changing Nina for another character I made named Sonja/Sophie/Sasha(still deciding). The reason is because @Dark_Stalker and others thought Amelia was red headed. And causes me to think of another character. But since I already have enough characters the only way to add her would be to get rid of one…maybe. Still might keep Nina.
So I wonder what you all think?
Nina:
Sasha:
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Redhead, Redhead, Redhead!
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It’s been almost a month and I still can’t believe she isn’t a redhead. You’ve ruined my mental image of her mate. 
Does Sasha have her own personality or would it just be an appearance/name change for Nina?
(I’m in favor of the redhead)
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I vote we replace Soloman with Sasha
Though I’m sure no one would mind Nate disappearing
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So, is there a demo for this game?
no there is no demo yet trust me he we post it when he feels the demo is ready
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Different personality. Like Nina would be a classy girl while Sasha will be the fun wild type. Like Sol from Smite: start at 6:50 to get what I mean. Sasha would also have Sols accent.
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