Lol that would be interesting but wouldn’t quite work.
He has a ring that enhances magic, but him and his species aren’t good at magic so it turns them invisible instead, but when he’s invisible there’s Nazgul who will be able to see him extra easily.
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Yes the same guy! son people may know him as Goku. ಠ_ಠ
No lol goku is from dragon ball z
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You can become stronger, faster, more durable.
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Lol now you got that song stuck in my head XD
Is that from the third narnia movie? Cuz I haven’t seen that yet??
Sorry for the spoilers then 
I’m laughing way more than I should 
but err… Lord of The Rings? Ring any bells? I’m not sure if you’re joking; too drunk to think properly
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Ooooooooo lol that explains it lol I never liked those movies
Hey me neither but I still keep up…wayyyy a minute!..there is a third narnia movie? when?who?and why?
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You… weren’t joking?
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LOL of course I wasn’t 
It shall be out… eventually??? Just want it to be good and got some power editing to do cuz I changed my mind on how I wanted the power stats to be.
oh, great, it’s better something slow but good than something fast but bad.
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If where talking about defensive power’s i suggest Negation. Negating other people power own yourself is probably more defensive the the other powers, but not just magic negation but the other thing’s such as poison, natural none-magical fire, curse or other people magic be it offensive or defensive or perhaps even passive.
Fade step my sound nice but Smoke Mimicry can do the same and i thought at one point you said you can fly with Smoke Mimicry. Time reduction also seems to have a same effect.
On another topic, and i don’t want to sound rude in fact I hope you take all what I say as idea’s. I have a problem with your power’s mainly how you divided them in Offensive, Defensive, and Passive. Many of these powers can be used in different / similar ways to each such as how all the defensive power help you to dodge but have there own properties to go with it. And also way restrict yourself with using pyro magic for offence when you can build a wall of flames for defense.
You mixed Portal Creation and Teleportation this is good idea as far as am concern. But it now need’s a new name. I suggest Space-Manipulation.
Smoke Mimicry as of right now you only describe it as a way to dodge enemy’s and possibly the ability to fly long distance. Am guessing this is because you describe it as a defensive. Smoke Mimicry in it’s essence is the ability to turn to smoke. You can Sneak virtually anywhere because of the simple fact Humans need air to breath. Doors and windows have crack for air, in smoke form you can travel in ventilation shaft and fly in small place, therefore hide in small places.
Telekinesis you contradicted yourself Since you already said that it can be used as a shield. Also I believe you said you didn’t want the Mc to have the same powers as Ro However I can argue that Gravity manipulation and Telekinesis are the same thing.
Guardian summoning i don’t really have any ideas or problem. But you might want to consider giving us different Guardian with different skill/weapon’s then giving us the power to take said weapon for ourselves.
Pyrokinesis is the manipulation of fire/chemical, I don’t know anything about chemicals so i can’t suggest anything there. But Fire can manipulated from fireball, fire spear, fire cloak, fire walls etc.
Pain illusion, got nothing on this beside an effective way to steal memory’s. Unless of course you want to evolve this to Negative illusion doing the same as before with the pain but can also do different effect with other Dark emotions, ( such as Confusion, Anger, Lust, Panic, Sloth, Delirious, Pride, etc)
Time reduction also Greatest use is that there no friendly fire unless wanted too. This could be useful if you stopped your own attack mid fight and active them again later on. Also ability to see the past but i think premonition has that ability. on a side note you could probably add Premonition and Time reduction together and call it Time Manipulation.
Vision art got nothing but i do have to give point’s for cool original idea. Same with Divination and Empathy. However it seems these power’s are restricted because of the Passive nature.
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Good suggestion but can’t do because that power is being used by the immortal witch Her Eminence Eliza the Silent so can’t use that power.
Yah smoke mimicry allows intangibility against attacks and flight. Time reduction slows down time for a few seconds to move away from attacks, or attack while the enemy is slowed.
It’s cool I’m relaxed with the AC at full blast so I’m good shoot lol.
Well unless you just want one power in the book lol. It’s categorized that way so the MC can have 3 powers that each does something for them to get through different obstacles. How would you use pyromancy to find someone lost? Or use it to sneak into a meeting to listen in on a what a coven is discussing about you?? Or dodge a demon with blades for arms? See lol that’s why they’re are cauterized in
Offensive- mainly used for combat
Defensive- defending or avoiding attacks and sneak travel
Passive- used for gaining knowledge
Lol but if more people agree with you I guess I can scratch the whole thing and give only one power then another in the next parts.
True you can do that but what happens if a witch your fighting cast a spell to open the flames? Or shoots lightning at you?.
I didn’t really fuse them just thinking about getting rid of one.
Yah you will do that in certain parts of the story. Defensive powers arnt just handy on the battlefield lol.
I say shield but mostly it’s deflecting which will take more energy than using your defensive power. It’s like blocking a baseball bat with your bare hands.
Lol no it’s not the same thing. Telekinesis let’s you move things how you want, gravity manipulation only affects the gravity. Make things have zero gravity to float or up the gravity to crush enemies.
That is actually the plan for future stories when your power grows? In book 2 you will gain a second knight, a woman made of light with different weapons than your first knight like a rapier and a whip for example.
Well in this case it’s just fire not chemical lol. But yes you will do those things except the fire cloak.
Umm Pain Illusion doesn’t steal memory or emotions. It causes the person to feel pain that’s not actually happening like having limbs cut off or being burned alive or any other painful thoughts until they go crazy from the pain, or die.
Eh it can’t rewind time(yet) or let you see into the past. Just slows down time. Eventually it will grow into time manipulation.
Just in the beginning eventually they will be able to grow into being able to use in combat. Example with Preminition being able to see what the enemy will do before they attack. Like Garnet in Steven Universe lol.
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This sounds perfect to me. Even if all the powers have some malleability, like possibly using Pyrokinesis to defend yourself or time reduction to kill someone (think: slow time to a crawl and snap their neck), having them categorized this way presents a reliable way of inferring how each might be used, and how they will be mainly used.
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