??? This might be a little blunt, but how in anyway is this a comment on your writing skill? You haven’t shown us any written narratives. This is constructive criticism and overall, I don’t think anyone’s been overly abrasive with you.
Though, having said that, I’m gonna wait to see the demo to give my opinion but if you’re married to this whole pre-set MC thing, I don’t know how well or not that goes here. It’s not my thing, but there’s a WIP on here that looks pretty popular called Monsters. It’s really not my thing and he gives options among the presets rather than there just being a set one, but there it is. (I could be wrong. Like I said, it’s not my thing and a lot bothered me about what I played. Doesn’t mean it’s not good.)