A Tale of Heroes (WIP) - 193k words. Updated 31/12/2022 with Chapter 5!

Sorry for the late response, but yes, you’re correct. That’s one of the examples I mean in terms of the player doing things that aren’t exactly heroic.

Whether it’s a justified decision to make or not is, well, up to you as player, really. I don’t think I have a personal preference for what to do in that scenario. It’s true that the terrorist ends up captured anyway, but her state (both mental and physical) can, um… vary a little bit.

@Moonglow Hello, welcome to the thread! I’m glad that you’ve enjoyed the game enough to replay it a few times, always lights my day (well, night now, I guess…) up to see people having fun with the story.

As for F & S, yeah, you’re right that there’s certain reasons why they aren’t romanceable. The former’s because he doesn’t really see anyone he knows so far as a possible partner (more on that latter). They’re more allies, some of them friends and such. It’s very unlikely anyone right now will get to seem different to him. He’s also got much bigger priorities in the shape of a (relatively) small, black-and-blue haired young girl, who has no idea of what he’s hiding from her protecting her from.

The latter, well, someone got to him first, and even if they hadn’t, he’s really slow to figure out and commit to his feelings. It took Victoria about two years of traveling together before he went “Hm. Do I…?”, and so far, it’s taken Ignis about 2.5-3 years, and she’s still not all the way there.

You could, theoretically, argue for the Doomed Ignis treatment, but the difference between the two of them is that while Ignis wants to at least pretend to move forward, Seeker is too terrified to take a step in any direction.


Also, another thing, which I shouldn’t be saying yet because, y’know, it’s still about five-six chapters off, but I’ve never been very good at keeping secrets or anything:

This is Iris Bakyr-Lambros. She’s a 22 years old powered person from [Redacted].

She’s gonna be important.

She also does not like you.

Have a quote from her:

“So, what? You want me to clap like a seal and tell you that it’s a great plan? American safety paid for with [redacted] lives, such a clean victory. This mess is completely of your own creation, but somehow, we’re the ones giving our lives to clean it up for you.”

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I love her already. Now to hope she is stronger or can atleast hang with the MC. Her interactions with Lat will be golden I can see it already XD.

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Oh, right, uh, power levels…

I definitely didn’t forget about them when coming up with Iris, or anything. I took it into account when designing her. Yeah. Totally.

Well, to give an idea after careful consideration of several seconds days, she’s definitely strong enough to mess up the MC.

But don’t expect her to be slugging it out next to you against your enemies. She fights in a… different, “can most definitely kill you if she wanted” kind of way.

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Is there anyway we can mess her up, cause I already hate her.

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oh shit, now you fully got my attention at this Iris girl. Can we, let just say, have this girl romanceable ?

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Well, you’re likely gonna be a tad too busy to actually develop some sort of serious rivalry, but considering she doesn’t really like the League (well, Seeker and Ignis specifically, but more on that later), you can probably pay her back with the same coin.

She’s got a lot of preconceived notions about the world, anyway. Maybe having someone who calls her out on her dumb shit would be good for her.

Tentatively, but yes. She’ll likely be a romance option, though that will have to wait until Book 2. Her appearance in this Book will come too late and the chapters too jam-packed for the MC to let their hormones do the work and start flirting.

She may, also, be the only other option I end up adding. Not because I can’t imagine other people being romanceable, but mostly as a matter of scope. We’ll have to wait and see. Book 1 chapters are already becoming rather large as is. With the levels of variation coming, well…

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Yep, i remember you saying something about adding another romance option in book 2, and if the one you add is her then it gonna be great, because the moment i see " She also does not like you ", my mind is already screaming TSUNDERE GIRL lol.

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Maybe I’ll end up liking her and after calling her out on her dumb shit, the us hating each other will be just a bad case of sexual tension, then other characters are like just kiss already. Book 2 spoilers.

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Is that some sort of uniform she’s wearing? From a powered team or is she still in school somewhere?

Everyone in the League is already stronger than mc right now (at least until Mars joins)…maybe even Lat. So I hope not. Don’t want too much Worf effect for my mc.

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If it is a school uniform, i bet its from a “elite school” or something from the like, cause:

In my eyes, this appears as a person who handt seen much of the (real and dark side) world

I already like this girl. She’s gonna be Cretan, isn’t she? The US is gonna make a “preemptive strike” against the King’s compound in Crete (a nation they ALREADY staged an illegal military operation in, btw), shit is gonna hit the fan, and a bunch of Cretans are gonna bite the dust in fixing the mess.

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So you’re saying she’s showing up about the time my Ignismancer will be needing to workout some frustration? I can handle that. Although you might be underestimating my mc’s hormones :yum:

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Not really. The other you said that we are only behind the big three(hell they don’t even rate Ignis that highly) and on par with Aki, hence why we have to catch up to Seeker and Forlan. Everyone has more experience of course but anything can happen in a fight regardless of long you’ve been at it. Also I have said it before that Lat’s powers are great but if she fights the MC she is gonna get stomped. So yea not too much work.

Other!MC is fallible too. Still has little to do with my hope that our hapless mc is not going to serve as another punching bag so a teenage brat can demonstrate the Worf effect.

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I think that we are strong tho. Like Dahariel said, we only behind the 3. If we train hard enough, we even reach to the power level of Forlon, and even Seeker. We are not the OP character, no, but we are not some weaklings to become anybody’s punching bag. We may be beated to shit, but we make sure the one who beat us taste the same shit like we do. That’s my opinion on the MC of this IF
About Lat, well in my opinion, she is special, but not more powerful than the MC. Remember the other Lat tell her to bypass Aki while we are already on her level. She’s strong, but stronger than MC? Definitely not .

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-sigh- You’re just making me yearn for a slow burn romances with F & S even more. lol Also, I couldn’t bring myself to play Ignis route because of ship her so hard with S. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: They are absolutely adorable together. So idk if I could actually play a RO route for S anyways because the thought of coming between them breaks my heart. The only way it would work is if there was a way to make my MC totally oblivious. Cuz even the comment Nova gives you if you are romancing Mars about ‘not being the 3rd wheel’ in comparison to the other 3 made me be like “Oooo everyone sees it but them!!!” lol

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Not exactly, but good eye! The design is still from a Picrew I found after a bit of searching, but it’s meant to represent defining clothing, yes.

Iris wears a pretty modern jacket, and it has a pretty noticeable insignia around the breast pocket area denoting her allegiance.

… Kind of like Seeker and Victoria do (and maybe Ignis eventually???), I guess, but I promise they’re wholly unrelated.

She’s not in school, though, most likely (still deciding on that one). Her government has a vetted interest in her, so they’ve helped her keep her studies going even during work and such.

The USA? Starting a military operation out of a desire for security that ends up spiraling out of control and costs them more than it would have to just offer tacit support and stay out of it?

… No, that’s ludicrous. Something like that would never happen!

Not telling you where she’s from yet, though. Her first appearance is gonna be a riot, and it’ll help the narrative when it’s not expected. :stuck_out_tongue:

Bad idea to mess with Mount Ida, anyway. The Germans tried to set up shop around it during WW2, and thank God the Cretans didn’t let them, or else the war would have ended in 1941 and “Germany” would be a historical term in the modern day.

Oh yes, everyone’s well aware of how that’s going. You’ll note Nova likes quipping about them, he makes a comment in Chapter 2 as well.

This isn’t in the game proper yet, but Aki’s actually rooting pretty hard for the two of them. They’re the people she’s closest to, besides Forlorn.


Sidenote, but RE Power Levels:

Some of you mentioned it before, but remember the game’s gonna be working mostly on “plot”. There’s an internal ranking I’m working off of, but since powers are poorly understood and the League is about to deal with something far beyond anything they ever had to before, exponential growth is 100% gonna be a thing.

Right now, the MC is pretty far below the top echelons (Seeker, Forlorn and Ignis), and decisively in the middle, that being them and Aki, with Latooni very quickly closing the gap. They’re above Nova, Mars and Dark Star, but…

Whether those rankings stay anywhere near similar by the time the end of the game rolls around is something that remains to be seen.

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Finally a jerk rival I can push around and not feel bad about it. I knew that not everyone likes the league so this was gonna happen. Does she hate the league because she was turned away or kicked out? Or is it more personal reasons. Either way things are about to get interesting

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Yep that love hate thing between the mc and the new character is gonna be ripe full juicy content for us in the next book.

It’s not hate, to be clear. She just doesn’t see all the hullaballoo, and she’s quite angry about the way her country has become entangled with the League. It doesn’t help that she’s rather proud of her home, and believes in the isolationist policy that it’s sworn by for most of its history, so she has a very negative opinion of sacrificing [redacted] lives for America.

Her reasons for not liking Seeker specifically are a spoiler, but her reasons for not liking Ignis are a tad simpler:

Her great-grandfather, an Egyptian immigrant who served in WW2, was sent as an advisor by his new country during the Suez Crisis. He ended up getting shrapnel stuck in him, courtesy of Coltello weaponry. It ended up costing him use of his legs in his old age, and definitely caused more than a little pain. He lived long enough for her to be cognizant of what had happened to him, and that’s led to a chip in her shoulder regarding the Coltellos in general.

…She’s not the most mature of people, fyi.

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