A New Pulse - First Bite WiP

Off-Topic Other Interactive Fiction
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Ahhh another game I liked allot!
BTW are you going to put in some romance in to this one?

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@stsword @Shoelip

Those should be fixed now.

@CrossOver

I settled on Vivienne being an alias. The player makes a comment about it.

@jcury

Yes they will be romance currently Sebastian, Alexis, Detective Blackwood and Detective Knight are the planned romances.

103

Cool, so if you save Jenn will she show up again? Also, the cops should still find evidence of her presence at the scene of the crime thanks to all that DNA she left there, so she can still be mentioned by them even if you don’t leave her body there.

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@Shoelip

Yeah she will show up later. And very good point about still finding her dna.

105

I still haven’t played all of it, but it seems to be my favourite WIP I’ve tried so far.

Then again, @Nocturnal_Stillness is an established HG author, so I would expect no less :).

The narrative is amazing and I love that the dialogue is structured like a script.

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@Mayday

Thanks!

The dialogue is like that as this’ll be eventually ported to a more visual IF system. I’m just using CS as it’s easier for me.

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@nocturnal_stillness if you ask where the nest is it says invalid indent

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@MarvelousMatty

It should be fixed now. (Well it passes randomtest anyhow)

109

@Nocturnal_Stillness This may sound perverted but when you first meet Alexis since she needs to get dressed is she in her underwear or nothing?

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@Iceman262

She is wearing a nightie she changes into normal clothes.

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@Nocturnal_Stillness Thank you

112

Is there a way to beat Sebastian?

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@Dark_Stalker

Yeah you can beat him (I’m assuming you mean the spar with the shock knives?)

Edit:

A gift for all of you. Some more character sketches drawn by @Bill1903!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/82599458/A%20New%20Pulse%20-%20First%20Bite/A%20new%20pulse%20game%20pics/lineup.png

[In order MC (female), Detective Blackwood, MC (male) and Sebastian.]

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Project Update

Progress;

Part One - First draft (complete)
Part Two - First draft (complete)
Part Three - First draft (complete)
Part Four - First draft (complete)
Part Five - First draft (complete)
Part Six - First draft (in progress)
Part Seven - First draft (To Do)
Part Eight - First draft (To Do)

Current word count = 36,176 (story and code)

A single playthrough should be approx 15k words

Game link:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/82599458/A%20New%20Pulse%20-%20First%20Bite/dfabulich-choicescript-59af6ab/web/mygame/index.html

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Yay your almost done.

116

Finally beat Sebastian.

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I said the truth is I’m innocent when did I mention vampires? I’M NOT CRAZY!

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@Dark_Stalker

Well spotted that option should alter that scene. Will fix that tomorrow!

119

This is way to fun to be legal…

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@Dark_Stalker

The lawyer shouldn’t mention vampires if you choose that option.

@Iconic_De

Thanks :slight_smile: