Hello, so a quick review on the story. Well certainly a good story to begin with. My choices you asked for were ‘Elig Wake’ and ‘Jodi’. Father is fighting for prince Jon. So there you go. At fist sight very good written, it captured my attention, and kept it fairly well.
Although I found a mistake, since the father chose to fight for prince Jon, and was made a knight by him but nonetheless I found this in the dialogue.
“My daughter knighted him yesterday, Jodi, you’re a lady now. Someday your child might be a knight themselves. He’s at Wull alongside my daughter.” The Dowager Queen said as kindly as she could.
So do be carefull right there.
For the rest everything fine so far, I did bump into this though
