A Mage Reborn, Book Two (WIP) - UPDATED August 7th | Book One Released!

from what ive gathered so far you can bullshit your way through that route

and yes there was a choice where you could lie about joining them and there is another choice where you can break out of there

This happens the exact same way if you’re working with the Black Grail. It doesn’t make any sense there, either.

I don’t know if it’s in the plans for when the entire Festival scenes are complete, but I’d like to suggest that the Saine scene be integrated in the main plot even if you stay to watch the fireworks, and a fireworks breakdown be integrated even if you leave early.

The breakdown is all sorts of oof, and the Saine scene has some pretty big calls to make on the MC’s reaction, and it’d be a shame for playthroughs to be missing either.

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yeah no surprise there given its still a WIP but it definitely felt like there should have been more to their reactions given that the MC basically single handedly took down the troublesome twins after gaining that power AND basically outdid Eli at healing the kids

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I tend to pick the “angry” option when Saine tells me about the festival, but I decided to check out the “Leon keeps embarrassing me” option, and:

1 - there’s the MC’s moniker missing from the third line there:*

and, hot damn, 2) how does this option manage to piss me off MORE than the angry one, because holy fucking shit, what even is this bullshit:

My soul is doing very fucking fine, THANK YOU VERY MUCH, and if it weren’t it sure as hell wouldn’t be these people’s prayers that would improve its situation. Like, this is just insulting; even after they know the truth, they’re trying to make it out like the MC was in the wrong.

I thought I was taking a risk picking it, because the option itself isn’t particularly indicative of WHY you’re angry, but hot damn if it didn’t nail it perfectly.

*it’s also missing from here:


meaning it might be a systemic error you’re doing with the variables.

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the Angry Choice fits so damn perfectly for my playthrough
i hope the next time we meet leon is during that festival just to slap him like he slapped the MC


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Actually, he punches you in the face, and I really need to return that favor; At this point, the only people in that kingdom my MC actually still gives a shit about are the only two people who bothered even trying to save him, even if he waved them off, knowing it was pointless

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Whoa, there - as far as we know, Aunt Bess is still alive.

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Oof! This is a great conflict for my MC to have. A RO loyal to Param and a MC loyal to Arcadia and their cause. From saving people with the White Fangs to assassinating targets for Tahlia.

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Oh, shit, forgot aunt Bess, yeah, her as well; I don’t think I’m forgetting anyone else?

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Wow, didn’t expect the demo to have so much content already, more than many of the WIPs I’ve come across! The premise is intriguing, and the story is written well so I look forward to new updates. :heart:

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Note that the “demo” is actually one game and change - one game (Book I) ends with the reactions of people to Ilya revealing the truth about your actions, while the next (Book II) starts with your resurrection*. I’m not sure Book I will be allowed to stay up once it’s submitted?

*I still can’t spell this word correctly in less than three attempts

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Grammarly is a life-saver

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What’s the highest amount of prestige that you have ever gotten?
I got 84 one time but unfortunately couldn’t get it again😓

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I’ll never forgive Grammarly for telling me I need to use shorter sentences!

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Seeing the change I recommended being included is strangely satisfying. Nice one @Parivir

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that, exactly lol.

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NOT THE BABY! SAINE NOOOOOO :sob:

This new update is making me cry :cry:

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“When I said I wanted to go to Burning Man, I didn’t mean THIS!”

I’m just saying, would it have killed them to spring for the GOOD barbecue sauce?

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