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Returning to the long-standing discussion of music. I think this music video fits A Mage Reborn.

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I wanted to ask, a lot of people say there should have been a trail but…why?.

It’s pretty open and shut. Ignoring your route you at least killed antes men and the saintess in front of people. And I’m not going to apply my modern day veiw on justice to a medieval setting. Just because your motive is Unclear doesn’t really mean anything

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The thing about crimes is, unless you’re completely out of your mind, every person has a motive for committing them. Basically, MC just did a 180 and went from self sacrificing hero to anti-param murderer in like a month, that’s not something that just happens; so either MC completely snapped, or they had some reason to kill the saintess. If it wasn’t out of hatred for param or hatred for the saintess, then it’d have to be pretty good motivation to walk into the most guarded area in the country to kill an important religious figure. If they figured that much out, and delved deeper into the possible reasons, they’d possibly realize that it was a necessity (and totally Ante’s fault) that the saintess was killed; to make a more modern comparison, no one would kill the pope publicly unless they had a darn good reason, really hated him, or was outright insane.

tl;dr: either MC snapped and went on a murder spree, or had a really good reason to pull a stunt like this without an escape plan or a way to avoid incrimination, and the latter is more likely than the former.

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I mean, why wouldn’t Leon assume that the MC just snapped or something? He says that he would have let the MC go, staged an execution and everything, if only they offered some sort of explanation. But none comes. Sure, Leon could have trusted us anyway, should have trusted… But in his eyes, shouldn’t have the MC offered him the same trust? As if in to rely on their friends and confine in them, whatever is weighting on them, whatever has pushed them to do such a terrible crime? In Leon’s eyes it’s the MC who broke the contract, so to speak, by refusing to talk and to confess their true reasons.
And I don’t know why everybody is so sure that there were no investigation, I guess, if we haven’t heard anything about it, we can assume there was none… But even if there were - there are no experts on the Arcadian magic in Param. Nobody would be able to say: ā€œListen, the MC is probably silent because there is a curse preventing them from speakingā€. So the only things to see are a dead saintess and ten dead secret agents. And a witness who saw us doing the deed after killing at least ten people. Yeah, it just doesn’t look good.
Plus the revolt is a very plausible thing, not a popular one, but a noble one. We know that Parami nobles like to intervene in successions, that they like to pit royal heirs against each other, we know they hated the Mage for ascending to power even before the war. Imagine how much the nobility hates the Mage by the end of the war. And if Leon is in love with them? That’s just the worst case scenario, really. And while Leon is a dumb-dumb (maybe a bit autistic and/or demisexual, because his social skills are… a bit lacking, mhm), he is not an idiot. You can’t be a good general if you can’t read and predict your opponents. You can’t win while being an underdog if you don’t have a plan. And when Leon and Saine left to let Julius have his throne in peace, Saine was still basically a kid. I believe that it was Leon who chose to do it, and not just because he wanted to have fun, but because he knew he needed to protect both of his brothers. So yeah, he would have understood how much pressure there was… and he wasn’t able to justify doing the good thing instead of the right thing when he didn’t have a reason for it. Because Mage weren’t able to give him one.

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Being a Commander and being a King are different things, and, I am sorry, but I just can’t see Leon as someone who would sit and think about every possibility and go ā€œHmm yes, judging by my possible peasant revolts chart, the safest option is to simply execute my comrade/close friend/loved oneā€. Maybe it’s just how I see this character but oh well.
Also, I never said that he should immediately release us like nothing happened, that would be dumb even for Leon. He could have simply kept us in a cell until at least some revelation would come out. Ilya managed to learn about out curse all on her own so yea, I think they could have figured it out in lets say 1-2 months span. If Leon would be still scared about the revolt, he could have put up a staged execution and continue his investigation ā€œin secretā€.
I am not saying that, what Leon did was 100% wrong, I am just saying that he wasn’t really thinking straight at the moment he decided to kill us. At that moment he had an ultimatum: Release Mage and fail his old brother and his entire Kingdom OR Execute Mage to secure trust and hope of paramians.

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Got to say, if your a king and you don’t take the threat of a possible peasant revolution seriously, you won’t be king long, and this isn’t a simple ā€œlet them eat cakeā€ moment either

On another note if I see someone steal something it doesn’t matter thier motivation, If they were just stealing to feed their family I would have mercy but Leon can’t. He’s the apex of the legal hierarchy and in this day and age a thief gets his hands cut off. No if ands or buts about it.

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Resisting the urge to debate law and politics of a medieval fantasy setting

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People keep saying that what Leon did is totally logical for a ruler to do but, fuck my life, I do not think so. You shouldn’t just kill powerful people you don’t like without getting to the root of things. There was no guarantee that MC acted on their own and that there will be no continuation after the Saintess’ ā€œassassinationā€. For all we know MC’s ā€œevil mage alliesā€ could arrive next month through spirit gates to murder Ilya in her sleep who is a next candidate for the Saintess position. You MUST investigate to keep your subjects safe, it was not a matter of a peasant killing their neighbor over two copper coins, it’s a matter of a national scale!!! MC is an extremely powerful mage with a suspicious undefined past, you can’t just kill them and call it a day unless you’re an absolute moron of a ruler. It’s like killing a powerful noble’s underling who didn’t yet tell you anything: you didn’t solve the problem, nor did you escape the consequences. So guess what, because the king didn’t do his homework my MC is pretty fucking pissed and is coming back with his new shiny allies to do some magical mischief :face_with_hand_over_mouth:

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Counterpoint number one: not peasant, but aristocratic, because we know that Parami noble do like their machinations and hate the Mage;
Counterpoint number two: after the Arcadian village it was Leon who were like ā€œHm, this is sus, it can’t be just one noble, let’s investigate thisā€. So he does have some brains, even if it’s not his favorite muscle to flex.
And yeah, while there is a difference in a skill set for a king and a general, there is a good overlap between the two - at the very least you need to predict what comes next and be ready to sacrifice some good people for the good of others.

Don’t.
Give in.

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Don’t have anything smart to write about counterpoint one. I would say that Leon was being the vocal one at counterpoint two, but then I would start playing favorites.
Also, I never said that Leon can’t be a good king, he has all the characteristics of one.
Alright, here is why I think he did what he did with us, it can all be bullshit but I don’t care at this point:

Summary

Leon is afraid of his future responsibilities, so he rans away with his younger brother and another friend for a more simple life to form an adventuring party. After returning to his home with a new friend of which he knows nothing about, he would much rather prefer to have a 20 minute spar session than to prepare to for his future mantle like his old brother wants him to.
After having his old brother killed by someone who’s his new friend calls ā€œSisterā€ he decides to put his trust in them, and go to war against Miriel for mostly two reasons: Avenge his brother and Liberate his Kingdom. After winning a two-year war, he realizes that now he will be the future king whether he wants to be one or not. After becoming the new Beacon of Light for paramians and having to live up to his Brother’s legacy, he feels nervous but fine, he has good friends on his side that will he knows he can trust.
Suddenly, his trusted friend/lover decides to leave him without giving any possible explanation. It’s not clear whether they even promised to come back at some point.
Leon has no one to really rely on. Saine also never wanted to have any of those responsibilities and Ilya is too busy with her Saintess training. All he has now is a trusted spymaster, some nobles who are waiting for an opportunity to have this new King do their bidding and an entire kingdom half of which in ruins after the war.
Fast forward a couple months, and suddenly Ante shows up with unconscious body of the Mage, explaining how they just murdered a comatosed Saintess and at least 10 guards who were stationed to guard her.
After trying to get an answer from Mage, he is either met with Plead, Silence or insults. Even if Mage didn’t leave him back then, it is still a very bad and emotional place for Leon to make a logical and proper decision. Right at that moment his only two choices are: Spare Mage and look inferior to his old brother Jullius, both in his eyes and in the eyes of an entire kingdom, OR Kill the Mage to secure his position as King (also a possibly petty revenge against Mage for leaving him but I dont fucking know at this point, i am not very smart)

I go sleep

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Luckily for all of us, we can all decide how we want our MCs to treat Leon. We all are basically gods of parallel universes. In one universe, Leon is forgiven. In another, the Mc is plotting revenge big-time.

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The golden sun mask in the music video kinda fits the legend of the Ishavak faith of the Arcadians. Especially if you have watched the Yotai opera on the Ishavak legend during the Blue Harvest festival with Yu.

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it feels wild to me that anyone in param would be like that eager to go back to war after several years of an incredibly bloody conflict in which you have only just placed your heavenly-ordained dynasty back on the throne but really it seems like the mc doesn’t pay very much attention to the political context leon’s in so we don’t really know much about it. it feels like just guessing. however! honestly i do not think this logic would make me feel better if i was the mage!

ā€œSo, you understand, MC, I know that you have fought and bled and suffered for my cause for years with no complaint, but no, I cannot try to figure out why you have done this very uncharacteristic and bizarre thing because, you see, I might look bad for a second.ā€ BROTHER.

imho i don’t think he does it to appease anyone. i think he sincerely believes mc is straight up a murderer i was just shocked to see him come to that conclusion so quickly after everything.

why on isha’s green earth can’t leon do this for us!!!

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True. He did say that the MC he knows has died and called the MC ā€œa demon who wears (MC’s) faceā€ in the dungeon the night before the execution. He was rather quick to believe in the worst of the MC instead of thinking there must be more to what happened, like Ilya and Saine did.

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In the cell, he could have chosen to punch the MC, yet he chose to punch the wall instead. At the execution itself, he could’ve riled up the crowd with A bit of hate speech or whatever you want to call it, yet he didn’t. Finally, when things got revealed, he went and lock himself into his room. Perhaps his actions was a bit messed up in some sense, but he’s got to feel something.

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i have AWFUL news

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OH I just spotted song stuff, lemme dump some of my favorites, mostly for the Mage, and 1 for each of the White Fangs.

Fish in a Birdcage

For Eli, Sister and the Mage!
Fish in a Birdcage [Official Video] - YouTube
As I breathe into our silence
There’s a voice that comforts me
It’s a voice of understanding
It’s the voice of empathy

Wings of feathers, tails and fin tips
We feel it works so differently
You gave me more than I could ask for
Indistinguishability

The Moon Will Sing

The Mage and Leon
The Moon Will Sing - YouTube
Name your courage now
We could have had anything, anything else
Instead, you hoarded all that’s left of me
Swallowing your doubt
Like swords to the pit of my belly
I want to feel the fire that you kept from me

The moon will sing a song for me
I loved you like the sun
Bore the shadows that you made
With no light of my own
I shine only with the light you gave me

Black Pear Tree

The Mage… Esp a resigned one who slowly turns bitter about what happened.
Black Pear Tree - The Mountain Goats and Kaki King - YouTube
I set the sapling in the hole
Started gently tamping down the dirt
I saw the future in a dream last night
Somebody’s gonna get hurt, somebody’s gonna get hurt
I hope it’s not me
But I suspect it’s going to have to be
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And when its time came I could see it happen
Blossoms black and sweet as Texas crude
I saw the future flowering like a ruptured vessel
Somebody’s gonna get screwed
It won’t be me
Someday I am going to walk out of here free

Theseus

A more forgiving mc for this one!
The Oh Hellos - Theseus - YouTube
Maybe that’s what it’s all about
We keep fixing what we know is only bound to break
What’s worth saving is never worth letting go to waste
I want to mend what I’ve got, instead of throwing away

Ain’t nothing come easy
No, nothing comes quick
It’s gonna hurt like hell to become well
But if we set the bone straight
It’ll mend
It’ll fix
And we’ll be well

Hebrews 11:40

This is just like, the Mage after the barbecue in my head, esp one with a positive relationship with the Arcadians (and possibly also with the White Fangs!)
The Mountain Goats Hebrews 11:40 - YouTube
Build fires to keep the beacon flashing
Where the earth lies flat
Blood calls to blood as the hours draw down
Invent my own family if it comes to that
Hold them close, hold them near
Tell them no one’s ever going to hurt them here
Steal the treasure and try to leave town
Fight my way back down
Don’t want to hurt anyone
Probably gonna have to before it’s all done

Take to the hills, run away
I’m gonna get my perfect body back someday
If not by faith then by the sword
I’m going to be restored

Creature

This is an Ilya song to me for some reason?
halfĀ·alive - creature (Audio) - YouTube
Look inside of me and see that I am not afraid
To walk inside the void like a kid inside a cave
Discovering the patterns of my soul and where it’s placed
I’ve been mapping many caverns but it still feels like a maze
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I am creation, both haunted and holy
Made in glory
Even the depths of the night cannot blind me

See the Day

Saine. This song is just Saine to me.
See the Day - YouTube
The sleeping slip has begun to fray
I never thought I’d see the day
The pious hunter stops stalking prey
I never thought I’d see the day

Spent too much time writing all the lore
I can’t quite tell what I’m hoping for
So I’ll live my life being so unsure
'Cause I can’t quite tell what I’m hoping for

Parrot

Stepdad - Parrot [HQ] - YouTube
This feels very Leon to me.
I’ve said a fair share of stupid things that I can’t hide
My wonderful friends just roll their eyes, stay by my side

Sometimes I even realize that I might risk physical harm
That’s when you glare into my eyes and clench your teeth and squeeze my arm
Then I feel like a pet store parrot ever spouting words
And when I’ve had a few too many I get quite excited
I start talking very loudly and this is when
Sometimes I get obnoxious, my ego gets the best of me

I think Buy the Stars by Marina is also a very Leon/MC song!

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I never ran into that. Perhaps it has something to do with the MC’s personality?

I believe it happens when you pick ā€œInsist on your innocenceā€ option and then ā€œā€¦I will never forgive you for thisā€ Doesn’t have much to do with personality stats, but I may be wrong.

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I picked Leon I understand. Well, now I also understand why Leon will smack you across the face if you choose the other option. First you plead your innocence, then you start issuing threats? Ahem lol.

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