Your best friend isn’t interested in you, romantically speaking.
This is a great start, I don’t typically like to read MCs with deep/disturbing emotional issues as a given, but I was engaged and okay with it in your story. Love the characters and dialogue. Minor critique is the voice in the head (Achlys). I don’t get why it is female by default (I assume it is by default, I play as a gay man so maybe it changes and I’m unaware), It’s the only thing that threw me out of it, I just would never have a female voice in my head talking back me so it was a bit jarring. Perhaps there is a plot reason why this is the case and we don’t know it yet, but irl the voices in my head all sound a lot like mine lol.
Achlys is the Greek Goddess of sorrow and general mental pain. That’s why the voice is female.
Wait, is this the first time the best friend isn’t a RO Daleko you are breaking too many rules you rebellious scamp
I’m really liking it so far! The scenes with alex are very sweet.
Wow, I am really enjoying this - great job! Can’t wait to read more
tbh i love this demo with all my being and i’m checking in with it everyday, tysm for this. the romance development with alex is so fcking good i’m actually in tears
Now this is the sort of game I can get behind. A chance to live over the real life that I badly screwed up when I was in my 20s.
Heh. If it’s any consolation, I’m currently ruining it in my 20s. :'D
Jokes aside, thank you. I really appreciate your comment–and everyone else’s.
I swear I could hear something like this in the back of my head. Lmao. But great start! I look forward to seeing more of your work!
I came for the story, I stayed for the memes in the comments. (Seriously, I’m rooting for this WIP.)
loved this!! so exited to see what happens next!
Game updated!
- Added Saturday.
- Added Achievements.
- Trigger Warnings updated.
The next update will include Sunday, and will be the last one.
Enjoy!
There are a couple of wrong pronouns (if the friends are supposed to be female, I mean. You forgot to add the variable), here are the ones I’ve found:
Fixed them. Thank you!
wow the MC is so anxious unfortunately i can relate
nevertheless, great story, look forward to continuing!