Nooooooo…my phone updated and I lost my game. Luckily its only 1 chapter but still. Buuuuh. I dug the 1st demo and so far the 2nd is even better - so glad you are back!

Soooooo…I have bad news about the old demo.

It’s dead, kaput, yeeted off into the afterlife. My bad. I’m gonna take the link off now.

So yeah. My bad.

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I liked what you’ve written so far for chapter one. I’m curious to see what the book says in comparison to what Hilda tells us, although I enjoyed the new conversations with both her and Bran. I also liked how they can appear both suspicious and trustworthy depending on how the player perceives Bran’s constant glaring and Hilda’s hesitation to explain certain things.

My only complaint is that there were a few moments where it felt like there could be more description – what makes the valley amazing (compared to how the forest area uses sequoia trees as reference), what do the houses in town look like, what features do the people in town have that make them not look human, and what makes the beasts pushing the carts strange.

Looking forward to seeing what’s in town! :relaxed:

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Is there any cool powers that giants have, like growing massive etc.?

Im glad you like it so far!

Thanks for your input. In the old demo, I had the problem with describing everything in extreme detail. Im trying to limit myself with how much I tell rather than show, but I’ll definitely put in those neccisary details in the future update.

The new Demo is refreshing and amazing but Mr. Old Demo will always be in my heart UwU~

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UwU UWU

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