You know, I told a ton of my friends in a PM I wasn’t commenting publicly on anything until one of my favorite WIPs came back, because nothing really interested me.
I think it’s safe for me to say that this has both interested me, and become one of my favorite WIPs, in a matter of half an hour.
You seem to have a really good and thought out concept and premise here, and I can’t wait until the demo drops.
You have a really great story in the works. I can see that much clearly. Good luck.