@Talon5505 it should have been “your”, not “you’re”.
Your grammar is improving.
You’re going to get better at using the rules of grammar.
@Redgrave Ironic, isn’t it?
So I’m wondering if there’s a situation where Emma goes crazy and tries to kill you, forcing you to kill her in self-defense?
I sometimes felt like she was gonna snap and murder everyone in the cathedral (Ghost-girl probably told her to).
Storm
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From hence forth grammatically correct sentences shall vanquish all the evilness, and tyranny that is improper grammar.
Aquila
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Wow. Just, wow.
The Spanish Empire will rule the world once again!
Apart from that… I’d like to kill Emma. Can I play your game, Mara?
Lola098
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@Storm
30’s pretty good. It’s my native language and even I find it hard and tedious at times.
@lola098 Thanks, for the offer maybe i pm you with some of my doubts. The english i was taught in school was horrible and in my country all the good academies with natives are insanely spensives like 400 dolars a month for 8 hours 2 each week. I can afford that so i have my oxford grammar in use exercises and this forum. Code for people is useful to watch how people native do. I just think i have a great vocabulary my problem is more how place in a good order the words in sentences.
@Aquila this game has a online demo i don’t know it work i had in past a entire mission , about what happened to Javier the mission he goes with emma , and she tells he was acting weird. Basically, Emma in function of your choices could
having a paranoical attack
being in love with him and think you want steal his lover.
Posessed by Cassie .
The fact its if you don’t die you discover that Emma was giving poisonous pills to him. That end provoking his weirdo attitude and death.
Sadly when my old phone died the mission died in it . I still having all the prologue like 6,000 words with origins lstripper math teacher , repo girl and poisoner ninja . and your horoscope is a important stat .
But i just don’t thing noone want read it so i stop totally the project. Maybe i just rewrite it and post it , in halloween like a forum joke ^^
@Havenstone @JimD @FairyGodFeather Shouldn’t this one be closed?
Nope i would use this for a Halloween joke so let them zombie :))
jjc73
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I thought this thread was still active on ideas of deaths of emma emma. Use a spoon to carve and slice the heart out. (Yes this was part in a movie. Why not an axe cousin? Cause the spoon will hurt more you twit.)
Could also use nails to oh wait, am I supposed to be thinking of instant deaths or slow torturous deaths?
Great work Mara, I can see quite an improvement there. 
Well its not fully alive due i lost my files when my phone died. I would do a parodyy of this for my Halloween nanowrimo this year. So people could do suggestions
jjc73
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I suggest a spoon, strangulation by her own entrails, cutting her into tiny pieces and feed my pet zombie
Good i already have a honey and grizzly bears idea.
JLBH
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Death by 1000 gold fishes
Porter
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Getting killed by a serial-killer flower (jest a flower that kills people)
Or getting eaten by a cow
Good ideas, I could add them to the list lol.
@poison_mara lol so looking forward to this =))
Drano Bottle Bomb? (It’s a plastic bottle filled with water and Drano, capped with a bit of tin foil, 30 seconds or less after it’s even slightly moved it blows up with an astonishing force)
Well I don’t know how found drano except in the bunker, but due its just a Halloween fun parodyproyect it doesn’t have to be logic ,right? =))
